题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Chris来信询问你校劳动课 ( labor course) 开展情况。请给他回信,内容包括:
1. 课程开设情况;
2. 课程内容 (参加社区服务,公益活动等);
3. 课后感悟。
注意:
1.字数80词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Chris,
How are you recently?
I’m wring to tell you aboutour school’s labor course. To form the students’ correct view of labor, colorful labor programs are open every week. We can help plan vegetables or feed chickens in the school-run farm. Besides, students are also encouraged to participate in community service and voluntary work.
Most of us are fascinated by the course because it offers an alternative to our busy school life. Not only are we relaxed but we have gained a higher moral value on life.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。要求考生写一封信,向英国朋友Chris回信介绍学校劳动课 ( labor course) 开展情况。
本篇书信的写作要点已经给出,属于提纲关作文,内容包括: 1. 课程开设情况;2. 课程内容 (参加社区服务,公益活动等);3. 课后感悟。
考生写作时需注意三点:一是在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。结合本文特点,学校课程的设置是常规性的安排,所以时态要用一般现在时。二是要详略得当,本文要点已经给出,结合要点可知,对本次活动的课程内容可以做详细介绍,但同时注意适当地增加细节,展开的内容要和主题有关系,切勿天马行空,胡乱发展;三是要恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。