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3．学校即将举办"读书节"，目前正广泛征集"读书节"宣传册图片．假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：

1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；
2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传"读书节"的理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文采用了"图表+提纲类"形式，根据文章所给提示信息给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅图片，描述图片同时阐述推荐理由，既是提纲作文又是图画类作文．时态应该用一般现在时．人称用第二和第三人称．重要短语：around the corner（即将到来），recommend sth to…．（推荐什么给），remind sb of sth （提醒某人…．），as far as I'm concerned （就我所知道的而言），turn out to be（结果是），not only…．，but also…．（不仅，而且），enhance …．understanding of…..（增强…..的理解），take sth into consideration…．（把…..考虑在内）．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
Since the Reading Festival is around the corner，I'm writing to recommend a picture which can be used in the brochure to remind the students of the pleasure of reading．
In the picture，three students are sitting at the table，discussing heatedly what they have just read．【高分句型】It seems that they have had a lot of fun through the discussion．（描述图片）Though it is admitted that reading is mostly a personal activity which needs quietness and concentration，as far as I'm concerned，it can also be a sharing experience when the same book is being appreciated．Just imagine that you have read a terrific detective story with fascinating and intricate plots．You are so amazed by the genius of the writer and you can't help sharing it with your classmates or best friends，who turn out to have been deeply impressed as well．【高分句型】The moment you mention the book，the passion and enthusiasm about the story will explode which can never be gained on your own．【高分句型】My ideal atmosphere of reading is just like that，through which you can not only appreciate the content by yourself，but also have the pleasure of sharing the plots or opinions with your peers，which will ultimately enhance your understanding of the book．【高分句型】To sum up，the reason of my recommendation is quite simple and apparent that reading，instead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and common interest．（阐述推荐该图片的理由）I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Yours sincerely，
Pan Yang

点评 写好这类图片及提纲式作文的关键是认真分析所给提示信息，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将要点完整地表述出来，并认真看图，围绕主题，提炼要点，发挥想象，语言力求准确、简洁．选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等．