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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：⒈ 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

⒉ 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

I think university life is a time for learning and experiencing new things. I can meet the other young people like me from many different places and can make lots friends. I will probably study and live away at home during this time, so I will have a lot more independent. Studying at university will be quite differently from studying at high school. I may not have so many homework to finish every day, but I will have to spend much more time working by myself. I know that in any university they are different societies or clubs organizing by the students themselves. I want to join the film society and the travel club because I show interest in both activities. This societies and clubs can make my life interesting and helped me make friends.

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Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss when to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choice such as going boating,climbing a mountain and going to a amusement park. Final, we decided to go to climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoy the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when they reached the top, we were surprising to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish the nearby dustbin. We were tired and happy.

假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：

（1）时间和地点；

（2）内容：学习唐诗；

（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。

注意：

1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

I’m sure you know the song “Happy Birthday”. But do you know who wrote the song and for whom it was written?

The retired professor, Archibald A. Hill in Lucasville, USA could tell us the story. Ninety-seven years ago, two of Mr. Archibald Hill’s aunts, Miss Patty Hill and Miss Mildred Hill were asked to write some songs for a book called “Song Storied for the Sunday Morning”. Miss Patty Hill and Miss Mildred Hill were both kindergarten teachers then. They loved children very much and wrote many beautiful songs for the book. One of them was the famous “Good Morning to You.” The song said, “Good morning to you, good morning to you, dear children, good morning to all.” This song was very popular at that time among kindergarten children. But not many grown-ups knew it. A few years later little Archibald was born. As his aunt, Miss Patty Hill sang the song “Happy Birthday” to the melody（曲调）of “Good Morning to you” to her little nephew（侄子）. She sang the song like this: Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday, dear Archie! Happy birthday to you!

Miss Patty Hill and her sister had never expected that this song would become so popular, but it really did. People all over the world like the song because of its simplicity in tune（曲调简单）and friendliness in words.

1.Archibald A.Hill was __________.

A. English B. Russian

C. American D. Australian

2.Professor Archibald A. Hill was Miss Mildred Hill’s __________.

A. son B. student

C. brother D. nephew

3.The song “Happy Birthday” has a history of __________ years.

A. 97 B. about 90

C. more than 90 D. less than 90

4.Why did Miss Hiss wrote songs?

A. Because they are musicians.

B. Because they love children.

C. Because they were asked to write for a book.

D. Because their nephew asked them to do so.

Camping wild is a wonderful way to experience the natural world and,at its best,it makes little environmental influence.But with increasing numbers of people wanting to escape into the wilderness,it is becoming more and more important to camp unobtrusively（不引人注目地）and leave no mark.

Wild camping is not permitted in many places,particularly in crowded lowland Britain.Wherever you are,find out about organizations responsible for managing wild spaces,and contact them to find out their policy on camping and shelter building.For example,it is fine to camp wild in remote parts of Scotland,but in England you must ask the landowner's permission,except in national parks.

Camping is about having relaxation,sleeping outdoors,experiencing bad weather,and making do without modem conveniences.A busy,fully-equipped campsite（野营地）seems to go against this,so seek out smaller,more remote places with easy access to open spaces and perhaps beaches.Better still,find a campsite with no road access: walking in makes a real adventure.

Finding the right spot to camp is the first step to guaranteeing a good night's sleep.Choose a campsite with privacy and minimum influence on others and the environment.Try to use an area where people have obviously camped before rather than creating a new spot.When camping in woodland,avoid standing dead trees,which may fall on a windy night.Avoid animal runs and caves,and possible homes of biting insects.Make sure you have most protection on the windward side.If you make a fire,do so downwind of your shelter.Always consider what influence you might have on the natural world.Avoid damaging plants.A good campsite is found,not made—changing it should be unnecessary.

1.You needn't ask for permission when camping in .

A. national parks in England B. most parts of Scotland

C. crowded lowland Britain D. most parts of England

2.The author thinks that a good campsite is one .

A. with easy access B. used previously

C. with modern conveniences D. far away from beaches

3.The last paragraph mainly deals with .

A. protecting animals B. building a campfire

C. camping in woodland D. finding a campsite with privacy

4.The passage is mainly about .

A. the protection of campsites B. the importance of wild camping

C. the human influence on campsites D. the dos and don'ts of wild camping

When I was young, I wished for a good car and a big house. That was my idea of success. I took all the advanced classes and tried to do well in the exams with my mind set on going to a key school. I just knew that I would somehow become famous and be able to afford the car and the dream house. All the way through junior years, my mind was planning this beautiful future.

Then in the eleventh grade, many losses changed my mind. First, one of my friends died at 16. Soon after, my great-grandmother passed away, followed by my beloved fourth-grade teacher. These events left me not knowing what to do or where to go . Death had never touched me so closely.

After a long period of emptiness (空虚), it finally struck me: Life is not promised and neither is future success. Though I was attempting to achieve material success, I was not enjoying my daily life. I realized that finding inner peace, purpose and happiness will stick with me forever and that is real success.

Enjoying life's precious quirks ( 偶发事件 ) makes an ordinary person more successful than a wealthy person who isn't content and takes everything for granted. The summer before senior years, my attitude changed greatly. Instead of memorizing facts, I began learning skills. Instead of focusing on the future, I focused on today and the many blessings and successes that came with it.

I still get excellent grades, but now I devote weeks to studying instead of struggling for exams, and I think about the future with a deeper sense of meaning. For me, being successful means truly living life each day.

1.The reason why the author changed his idea of success is that ________ .

A. he can't afford his house

B. his beloved teacher was dead

C. he didn't know what to do or where to go

D. he lost a few beloved persons in a short time

2.According to the author which of the following is the real success for a person?

A. Being famous. B. Truly living life each day.

C. Good car and big house. D. Material achievements.

3.What does the author want to tell the readers?

A. The true meaning of the life. B. The true meaning of studying.

C. How to achieve success. D. His opinion about success.

4.According to the passage, which of the following is true?

A. The writer thinks that success is not promised.

B. His teacher died before the death of his grandpa.

C. The writer didn't do well in all the exams.

D. He didn't want to take all the exams.

A group of graduates got together to visit their old university professor.

The conversation soon turned into complaints about ______ in work and life. To offer his _______ coffee, the professor went to the kitchen and ______ with a large pot of coffee and a ______ of cups — porcelain, plastic, glass, crystal, some plain-looking, some expensive, some beautiful — telling them to ______ themselves to the coffee.

When all the students had a cup of coffee in hand, the professor said, “if you have ______, all the nice-looking expensive cups have been taken up, ______ the plain and cheap ones. While it is ______ for you to want only the best for yourselves, that is the ______ of your problems and stress.”

“Be assured that the cup itself ______ no quality to the coffee. ______ it is just more expensive and in some cases ______ hides what we drink.”

“______ all of you really want is the coffee, not the cup, ______ you consciously went for the best cups… And then you began ______ each other’s cups.”

Now consider this: ______ is the coffee; the jobs, money and position in society are the cups. They are just tools to hold and ______ life, and the type of cup we have does not define, nor change the ______ of life we live. Sometimes, by concentrating only on the cup, we ______ to enjoy the coffee. Value the coffee, not the cups! Don’t let the cups ______ you … enjoy the coffee instead.

1.A. stress B. dream C. sorrow D. truth

2.A. friends B. customers C. fellows D. guests

3.A. carried B. returned C. arrived D. reached

4.A. kind B. variety C. sort D. number

5.A. devote B. expose C. help D. absorb

6.A. searched B. witnessed C. noticed D. discovered

7.A. leaving behind B. leaving over C. falling about D. falling behind

8.A. strange B. normal C. wonderful D. important

9.A. purpose B. answer C. source D. result

10.A. takes B. links C. passes D. adds

11.A. At no time B. At all times C. In no case D. In most cases

12.A. ever B. even C. never D. hardly

13.A. What B. That C. Which D. Whether

14.A. but B. so C. and D. for

15.A. suspecting B. liking C. praising D. eyeing

16.A. Love B. Life C. Future D. Failure

17.A. contain B. create C. support D. own

18.A. quantity B. style C. quality D. standard

19.A. have B. manage C. plan D. fail

20.A. envy B. drive C. force D. assess

1.I used to ____________（钦佩）him as a true scientist and a hard worker.

2._____________（农业）in this country has developed after liberation.

3.If you wish for good advice, ____________（咨询） an old man.

4.When I arrived in the USA, I found my English was very __________（有限的）.

5.He likes _______________（徘徊, 漫步）in the street at night.

6.You didn’t bother me. On the ___________（相反）, I like to be with you.

7.It is bad _____________（礼貌）to speak with your mouth full.

8.The professor has brought in a good __________(系统) of teaching languages from abroad.

9.He doesn't like to behave __________（激烈地）; instead, he prefers to solve the problem in peace.

10.The river is so polluted that every day we can see a lot of things ________（漂浮）on the water.

11.Now we still don’t know whether life __________（存在）on Mars.

12.I am looking forward to __________（闲聊）with you on the internet.

13.We need to take ___________（措施） at once to prevent the growth of the population in China.

14.The patient is __________(稍微) better today.

15.When are you going to marry and __________（定居） down?

Each year, we are exposed to ten thousand ads on average. They try to sell us their products by using beautiful art, videos, images or slogans that are catchy. The most famous companies have highly popular logos that can be recognized by almost everybody. For those of you who have seen the movie Finding Forrester, there is that scene where Jamal walks up to some guy with a BMW and asks him what the car logo means. The man did not know the answer and since that day, whenever I see a famous company logo I try to find the meaning of it.

Many think the horse on the Ferrari logo represents the horsepower of the cars they manufacture. The story behind it is far more interesting. During World War I, a pilot, Count Francesco Baracca, painted the horse on his airplane to bring him luck. He had it on his plane because it was the logo of his squadron（空军中队）. Baracca’s mother then convinced Enzo Ferrari to put the logo on his racing cars in the early 1930’s to bring good luck to the drivers. The logo then stayed the same ever since. The yellow on the background represents the birthplace of Enzo Ferrari.

Starbucks started in 1971, in Seattle. The mermaid（美人鱼）represented on the logo is now known by any coffee drinker. It is a mythological sea creature with the look of a female, the only difference being that they have a tail of a fish. The reason why Starbucks incorporated one in their company logo is that it was believed that mermaids used to sing to sailors in order to make them walk away from their ship or to ground their ships. In the 1500s, spices, tea and coffee were popular merchandise to trade. So the mermaid in the logo of Starbucks is the one that “brings” coffee and tea to the stores.

1.The writer became interested in logos of some famous brands after _______.

A. he watched an attractive movie

B. he saw a scene in a movie

C. he walked up to some guy with a BMW

D. he noticed some famous logos

2.Many companies use logos because _________.

A. people enjoy beautiful logos

B. people are more likely to buy their products

C. people can recognize the products more easily

D. people are interested in the meanings of the logos

3.Which of the following is true according to Paragraph3?

A. Starbucks was once a company trading spices, tea and coffee.

B. Hearing mermaids sing, sailors would know the right direction.

C. Starbucks has a history of more than five hundred years.

D. The logo of Starbucks is believed to make the business years.

4.The underlined word “incorporated” in the third paragraph probably means _____.

A. included B. abandoned

C. corrected D. designed

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