题目内容
2.假定你是李华,是你班班长.学校外教James发电子邮件对没能参加你班上周日组织的登山活动表示抱歉并询问活动情况.请你根据以下提示,用英语回复邮件.内容应包括:
1.对老师表示理解;
2.介绍活动的情况;
3.你们的愿望.
注意:
1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.词数100左右.
Dear James,
Nice to hear from you!I know the reason for your being absent in that you are very busy,
Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs,where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day,It was like a rest from our busy school life.And it was a really unforgettable trip.Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness.
We are looking forward to seeing you there.Best wishes for you!you
Yours
LiHua.
分析 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
亮点句型一:Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs,where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day.上星期日,我们班去郊外爬山,在那里我们玩得很开心,度过了一个轻松的春日.本句是一个非限制性定语从句,先行词为mountain,在定语从句中做状语,所以用关系副词where来引导.
亮点句型二:Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness.那天拍些照片附在这封邮件,请分享我的快乐.本句中taken that day在句中作定语,修饰名词photos,动词take与photos之间是被动关系,所以用过去分词做定语.
解答 Dear James,
Nice to hear from you!I know the reason for your being absent is that you are very busy,
Last Sunday my class went to climb a mountain in the suburbs,where we had a wonderful time and enjoyed a relaxing spring day.(亮点句型一) It was like a rest from our busy school life.And it was a really unforgettable trip.Some photos taken that day will be attached to this email and please share my happiness.(亮点句型二)
We are looking forward to seeing you there.Best wishes for you!
Yours
LiHua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
__________,they are packing up to leave.( )
A. | The job was done | B. | The job has been done | ||
C. | With the job done | D. | With the job doing |