Question

14．In a small village，the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper（脾气）．The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words．While he forgot what he spoke in anger，his friends and neighbours avoided him．
His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness．Unfortunately，all their attempts failed．Finally，the boy's father came up with an idea．
One day，his father gave him a huge bag of nails，asking him to hammer one nail to the fence every time he lost his temper．The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said．
His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day!Over the next few days，the little boy found it very difficult to hammer the nails into the fence and decided to control his temper．
Gradually，the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none!
Now，his father told him to remove the nails every day as he had controlled his anger．Several days passed and the boy was able to pull out most of the nails from the fence．
The father appreciated him and asked him，pointing to one of the holes，"What do you see there？"
The boy replied，"A hole in the fence？"
He told the boy，"The nails were your bad temper and they were hammered into people．You ca n remove the nails but still see the holes in the fence．The fence never looks the same!It has scars all over!Your bad temper and anger were like that!Use words for good．Use them to show your heart!"
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Answer 1

分析 文章概要，在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接词进行连接，使上下句之间具有连贯性．
【亮点说明】
文章对原文要点的理解和呈现情况比较好，按照故事发展的顺序展开，用几个简洁的句子把文章内容表述的非常清晰完整．文章使用了很好的短语和句子给文章增色bad-tempered脾气坏的；To help him give up his anger为了帮助他克服坏脾气（不定式作状语）；whenever he became angry无论何时他感到生气时．
高分句型一：
To help him give up his anger，his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry and remove one whenever he didn't lose his temper．
为了帮助他放弃他的易怒脾气，他的父亲让他把钉子钉进篱笆在他很生气的时候，可以拔掉一个只要他不发脾气．
高分句型二：
This story tells us just like holes in a fence，a bad temper and anger can hurt other forever．
这个故事告诉我们，就像在一个栅栏上穿孔，坏脾气和愤怒会伤害其他的永远．

解答 There was a little bad-tempered boy in a small village．To help him give up his anger，his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry and remove one whenever he didn't lose his temper（高分句型一）．Gradually，the boy could control his temper．This story tells us just like holes in a fence，a bad temper and anger can hurt other forever（高分句型二）．

点评 概要写作的基础是理解语篇，而读懂语篇的基础是词汇，尤其是对关键词汇的掌握与运用．在此基础上，综合运用语法与句法结构，按照行文逻辑组织语言，形成概要．