题目内容
4.电脑在我们生活中越来越重要,一些学生认为电脑有很多好处,而一些学生认为电脑有很多弊端.请结合下表内容,写篇文章并发表自己的看法.注意:1.词数100左右,开头已为你写好(不仅计入总次数)
2.应适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
AgreementDisagreement
1.help us to study
2.watch TV and listen to music,make our school life colorful
3.make more friends
1.bad for our eyes
2.waste us too much time and money
3.visit some unhealthy websites
Nowadays,computers play an important part in our lives,and they are very popular with students.Some students think.
分析 本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一篇短文,谈谈对电脑的看法.
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时.
写作要点:1.电脑的好处; 2.电脑的弊端;3.个人看法
高分句型一
Second,in our free time,we can watch TV and listen to music on the Internet to make our school life colorful.
在本句中包含一个不定式短语make our school life colorful用作目的状语,其中含有多个介词短语用作状语,in our free time时间状语;on the Internet地点状语.
高分句型二
But some students have different opinions,they think if we use a computer for a long time,it is bad for our eyes.
本句为but连接的一个并列句.动词think后面包含一个宾语从句if we use a computer for a long time,it is bad for our eyes,从句中还有一个if引导的条件状语从句,主句为it is bad for our eyes.
高分句型三
Some students even visit unhealthy websites,which is not good for their growth.
本句中含有一个which引导的非限制性定语从句.be good for sth对…有好处.
解答 Nowadays,computers play an important part in our lives,and they are very popular with students.Some students think computers are very useful,First,we can use computers to get some information to help us study.Second,in our free time,we can watch TV and listen to music on the Internet to make our school life colorful.(高分句型一) Third,we can make more friends through computers.(提出肯定观点)
But some students have different opinions,they think if we use a computer for a long time,it is bad for our eyes.(高分句型二) Some students spend too much time and money on playing computer games.As a result,it wastes us a lot of time and money.Some students even visit unhealthy websites,which is not good for their growth.(高分句型三)(反对观点)
In my opinion,every coin has two sides.If we use computers properly,they can bring a lot of benefits to us.We had better not spend too much time on computers,otherwise,it would be bad for our study(表达个人看法)
点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.