题目内容
【题目】短文改错英语课上,老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下小作文为你同桌所写,请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3.必须按答题要求做题,否则不给分。
On March 25th last spring, I, as well as my brothers, were leaving for Nanjin in order to go to Jack's concert. I very fond of Jack's songs so I couldn't wait to see him. After we arrived at the center of the water stadium, the large number of people were waiting there. We met a few exciting fans of Jack, smiling and holding picture of Jack. Finally, at 8 o'clock in the evening, Jack turned down slowly among the cheers of all fans. Dressing in a red coat, Jack sang many more beautiful songs.
Following his rhythm, I sang with music. Finally, the concert ended up with a famous song by Jack.
【答案】
【1】were---was
【2】I和very之间加was
【3】After---When
【4】the ---a
【5】exciting---excited
【6】picture--- pictures
【7】down---up
【8】Dressing--- Dressed
【9】去掉more
【10】with---to
【解析】
【1】were---was I, as well as my brothers,在这里as well as连接两个主语,后面的谓语动故把词在人称和数上和as well as前的主语保持一致,故把were---was。
【2】I和very之间加was 固定短语:be fond of ,根据句意可知在I和very之间加was。
【3】After---When 根据句意可知此处表达的意思是:当我们到达---的时候,故把After---When,特别注意大写开头。
【4】the ---a 固定结构:a large number of 大量的---,故把the ---a。
【5】exciting---excited 格局拘役可知此处表达的意思是:几个感到兴奋的fans,故把exciting---excited。
【6】picture--- pictures 句意:我们遇见了杰克的几个粉丝,他们微笑着并手里拿着杰克的照片,可知此处picture用复数形式,故把picture--- pictures。
【7】down---up 句意:杰克慢慢地出现在所有粉丝的欢呼声中。turn up出现,把音量调大;turn down拒绝,把音量调小。可知把down---up。
【8】Dressing--- Dressed 固定搭配:be dressed in 穿着---,戴着---。在此处做状语,故把Dressing--- Dressed。注意大写开头。
【9】去掉more 句意:杰克唱了很多有没得的歌曲。此处并没有比较的对象,故去掉more。
【10】with---to to music 按着音乐,故把with---to。
【知识归纳】
表示情感的现在分词和过去分词
surprising令人惊讶的,surprised感到惊讶;frightening令人害怕的, frightened感到害怕; moving令人感动的, moved 感动;exciting 令人兴奋的,excited 感到兴奋;boring令人厌烦的, bored感到厌烦。现在分词的主语通常指事物;过去分词的主语通常指人。比如第7小题,annoying---annoyed 此处表示教授感到烦恼,故把annoying---annoyed。