Question

【题目】书面表达

近些年来，随着人们生活水平的日益改善，饲养宠物的人们的数量与日俱增。饲养宠物给人们带来快乐的同时，也随之带来了一些问题。主要有：（一）、宠物发出的噪音非常扰民；（二）、动物的粪便会污染环境；（三）、当主人带着宠物去公共场所时，有些宠物会吓着孩子甚至咬人；（四）、 某些宠物会传播疾病，已经引起了人们的广泛关注。

假如你是李华，请你就上面提到的人们饲养宠物带了的问题给报社编辑写一封信，寻求帮助， 并期待媒体能够就解决该问题做一些事情。

注意：

1. 字数：100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but _____________________________

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to tell you something about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reasons.

First of all, as it is known to people, pets make much noise that troubles residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public places where they may frighten children or even bite people. The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Taking all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media to do something for this.

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语First of all首先；What’s more而且；take sth into consideration 认真考虑某事；First of all, as it is known to people, pets make much noise that troubles residents a lot这个句子运用到非限制性定语从句；What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, which makes people quite uncomfortable.这个句子中it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句；The most important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention.这个句子运用到that引导的表语从句；