[题目]短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\).并在该句下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

【答案】

【1】made改为makes；

【2】at改为to；

【3】movie改为movies

【4】去掉the；

【5】How改为What；

【6】different 改为differently

【7】加to；

【8】fallen改为fall；

【9】Beside改为Besides；

【10】keeping改为kept；

【解析】

试题分析：短文改错题。

【1】made改为makes；文中第一句The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited.前面用的是一般现在时，后面要时态一致。主语是the winter holiday单数，后面make要变成单三形式，故made改为makes。

【2】at改为to；考查固定搭配。文中第二句I have been looking forward at...look forward to期待，盼望，故at改为to。

【3】movie改为movies；文中第三句climb mountains and see several movie.前面mountains用的是复数，and连接两个并列的短语，所以movie也要用复数，故movie改为movies。

【4】去掉the；考查固定用法。文中第四句I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. 打篮球是play basketball，中间不需要冠词the，故去掉the。

【5】How改为What；考查感叹句。文中第五句 How a wonderful time ...由how和what引导的感叹句主要有两种形式：①what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语+谓语+(it is).；②How+adj.（adv.）+主语+谓语+(it is).根据原文可知，what更符合题意，故How改为What。

【6】different 改为differently；文中第六句my parents think different. Think是动词，动词后面是用副词来修饰，故different 改为differently。

【7】加to；考查want的用法。文中第七句They don’t want me go out. want的用法：want to do sth；想要做某事；want sb to do sth 想要某人做某事；故加to。

【8】fallen改为fall；文中第八句 I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others.主语是 I’ll，连词or连接两个并列短语，后面的是动词原形，故fallen改为fall。

【9】Beside改为Besides；文中第九句Beside, they are afraid..句子开头且用逗号隔开，所以前面是一个连词，另外，除…之外（还有）是besides，故Beside改为Besides。

【10】keeping改为kept；文中第十句I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. 句意：我讨厌像笼子里的鸟一样对待。后面的是一个后置定语，主语是the bird，物作主语，后面要用过去分词，故keeping改为kept。

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