题目内容
【题目】假设你拥有一个名叫Allen的机器人,请根据以下内容,以My Own Android为题,简要介绍你的这位机器人朋友。
1. 制造于2008年1月,身高1.5米;
2. 具备人工智能: 可以聊天、下棋(play chess)、玩游戏;
3. 几乎会做一切家务,尤其在陪护年迈的爷爷方面令人满意;
4. 希望能够根据需要随时升级(update)。
My Own Android
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【答案】My Own Android
I have an android named Allen, which was made in January, 2008. He is about 1.5 metres in height and has artificial intelligence. This means he can talk with everyone. Sometimes we play chess or play games. Allen can do almost all the housework, such as cleaning the house and cooking the dinner, but the best thing Allen can do is that when no one is at home, he can take care of my grandpa, who is quite old now. My grandpa is satisfied with Allen’s service.
Of course, if Allen can be updated when necessary, I think, that’s much bette
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文。本篇要求考生以My Own Android为题,介绍自己的机器人朋友Allen。
体裁:记叙文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:分总
要求:
1. 制造于2008年1月,身高1.5米;
2. 具备人工智能: 可以聊天、下棋、玩游戏;
3. 几乎会做一切家务,尤其在陪护年迈的爷爷方面令人满意;
4. 希望能够根据需要随时升级。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
in height/ play chess/ in particular/ keep sb companion/ such as/ according to/ take care of/ meet one's demand/ be satisfied with
第三步:连词成句
1. I have an android named Allen, which was made in January, 2008.
2. He is about 1.5 meters in height with artificial intelligence, which means he can talk with everyone.
3. Sometimes we play chess or play games.
4. Allen can do almost all the housework, such as cleaning the house and cooking the dinner.
5. What Allen can do best is that when no one is at home, he can take care of my grandpa, who is quite old now.
6. Allen meets my grandfather's demand.
7. If Allen can be updated when necessary, I think, it will be much better.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)
