Question

【题目】写作

金钱不是万能的，但没有钱是万万不能的。请根据以下提示，写一篇100词左右的英语短文来表达你的金钱观。

1. 你如何看待金钱？

2. 假如你有100万美元，你会如何处理，并给出你的理由。

注意：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Money, in my opinion, plays a very important part in our life. However, even though we cannot live without money, it isn’t everything. The most important thing about money is how we spend it and what we do with it.

If I had one million dollars, I would start a school for children in poor areas, who are badly in need of good education. Meanwhile, I would give away some money to those in need, because it’s better to give than to receive.

Only by helping others can we achieve a real sense of happiness.

【解析】

试题分析：考生在文中要阐述自己对金钱的看法，如何处理100万美元和理由，不能有遗漏；适当拓展发挥，使文章有条理，行文流畅。

【亮点说明】文章运用了一些好的词组：play a very important part in起重要作用，in need需要。范文中的句式多变，运用不同的语法知识：even though引导的让步状语从句；在The most important thing about money is how we spend it中，使用了表语从句；使用了非限制性定语从句who are badly in need of good education；倒装句Only by helping others can we achieve a real sense of happiness。文章使用了Meanwhile这样的词使文章连贯，流畅，条理清楚。