题目内容
【题目】每年都有许多人出国旅游,一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英语报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华,请你给报社专栏编辑写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下:
1. 尊重习俗; 2. 不高声喧哗; 3. 其它。
注意 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.
Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act.
Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据所给要点,以“文明出国旅游”为主题给报社专栏编辑写一封信,呼吁大家做文明游客。内容包括:1.尊重习俗;2.不高声喧哗;3. 其它。写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排,使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型,是学生们比较熟悉的,所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。
写作亮点:这是一篇非常优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚,结构清晰,要点全面。而且作者在写作时,并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序,逐句翻译的,而是将这些信息进行了整合,让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范,而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式,增强了文章的连贯性。如不定式表目的、定语从句、宾语从句、和倒装句的使用;for sightseeing and relaxation、civilized tourist、it is necessary to、等词汇和First, Also, More importantly连接词等。
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