Question

【题目】假如你是李华，在一位名叫Tina的外国友人的博客上，你看到了如下内容：

I am often told not to put off(推迟) till tomorrow what can be done today.

I’ve tried many times but I cannot make it. Can you give me some advice?

请你根据博客的内容和写作要点提示，给她回复。写作要点：1. 表明自己的看法；2. 提出至少两条建议。

注意： 1. 词数120左右, 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

2. 请保持卷面整洁，美观！

Dear Tina,

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Hope my ideas will help.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tina,

I understand your situation. After all, no one wants to put off till

tomorrow what can be done today, for we have many new things to do the next day.The bad habit, once formed, is really difficult to get rid of. However, with a strong will and some necessary measures, you can finally make it. As a proverb（格言） says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

You can make friends with those who don’t put off till tomorrow what can bedone today. If so, you will learn from them and care about how they view you. Besides, reward yourself with something you enjoyafter you finish a big task, which I believe will make you feel good.

Hope my ideas will help.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇叙述性的提建议写作。根据博客的内容和写作要点提示，清晰表达，并且要不失亮点，准确把握英文句子的书写，避免出现汉语式英语的现象。要求：1. 表明自己的看法；2. 提出至少两条建议。注意：1. 词数120左右。 【亮点说明】范文首先阐述这位友人存在的习惯不好的，接着鼓励他去改掉坏习惯，然后另起一段具体地提建议。虽结构简单，但是层次清晰，其中也用了一些高级的句型，使得文章水平在一个高的层面，如: you will learn from them and care about how they view you.宾语从句；You can make friends with those who don’t put off till tomorrow what can bedone today.；reward yourself with something you enjoyafter you finish a big task, which I believe will make you feel good.等定语从句；另外引用引言As a proverb（格言） says, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”使得所提的建议更有说服力。还采用了一些比较好的短语，After all，毕竟；get rid of除去；另外；If so，如果这样；有条有理，避免文章比较单一，简单无味；同样有一些好的衔接词：However；Besides；如这些都给文章带来了亮点。