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17．随着中西文化交流的不断加强，西方的一些习俗也被引入中国，越来越多的年轻人热衷于在圣诞节那天以各种形式庆祝这一西方的节日．请你就《圣诞节将会取代春节吗？》为题目，写一篇英语短文．
写作要点：1）中国人庆祝圣诞的现状；
2）圣诞节是否会取代春节及其原因；
3）你的看法．
注意：1）短文词数120词左右；      2）开头部分已写好，不计入总次数．
Will Christmas Replace the Spring Festival？
Christmas arouse increasing attention year by year in China．
                                                                   

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于圣诞节将会取代春节话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一中国人庆祝圣诞的现状；二圣诞节是否会取代春节及其原因；三自己的看法．
高分句型：
1．One reason lies in the fact that Christmas only affects Christians，college students and joint-venture workers．句子里lies in 表示"存在于"；that 引导同位语从句，介绍the fact 的内容．
一个原因是这个事实，圣诞节只是影响基督徒，大学生以及合资企业的员工．
2．I think it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the West，a lot of Western holidays have been gradually introduced into China．句子里it 做形式主语，代指that 从句；have been gradually introduced 事现在完成时态的被动，表示"已经被引入"．
我认为，随着中西方交流的增加，很多西方的节日被引入中国是很自然的．

解答 Will Christmas Replace the Spring Festival？
    Christmas arouses increasing attention year by year in China．Christmas cards become popular with students．People hold Christmas parties and exchange Christmas gifts．A lot of programs about Christmas are on the TV and radio．Meanwhile，the Spring Festival is less appealing to youngsters．Thus some people wonder whether Christmas will replace the Spring Festival．（中国人庆祝圣诞的现状）
     This worry is fairly unnecessary．One reason lies in the fact that Christmas only affects Christians，college students and joint-venture workers．【高分句型一】Another reason is that Christmas is mostly celebrated in cities．Few people in countryside show extreme interest in this exotic festival．By contrast，the Spring Festival is the most influential traditional festival in every family．（圣诞节是否会取代春节及其原因）
     I think it is natural that with increasing exchanges with the West，a lot of Western holidays have been gradually introduced into China．【高分句型二】For us Chinese we should never neglect or even discard our own traditional festivals．For centuries Chinese have observed this traditional holiday to welcome the beginning of a new year．And we should treasure the Spring Festival forever．（自己的看法）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
考生要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，尽可能的使用较复杂的句子结构，尽量使用高级词汇以便得到较高的分数．考生注意使用过渡词或者过渡句来使文章读起来比较流畅．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作练习以外，还可以适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．