题目内容
9.春天来了,同学们都热衷于各类户外拓展活动.上周六,你们班同学和老师去了桃花山游玩,请根据以下提示写一篇日记(词数120字左右).1、你们8点在校门口集合,步行2小时到达.
2、桃花山景色优美,人很多,其中有不少是中学生.
3、你们的老师给你们介绍了乡村旅游对经济发展的影响,还开展了丰富的小组活动,拍了很多照片.
4、你的收获或感想.
乡村旅游 rural tourism
April 2nd Saturday Fine
Today is Saturday,my classmates and teachers went for an outing on the Taohua Mountain.
分析 这是一篇关于桃花山游玩的日记.根据题目要求可知用第一人称.时态用一般过去时态描述游玩过程;一般现在时态描述自己的收获或感想.内容包括:一点明主题;二描述游玩过程;三叙述自己的感想.
高分句型:
1.The beauty of the Taohua Mountain attracted a lot of people,some of whom were senior and junior students.句子里 whom 引导非限制性定语从句,代指先行词a lot of people.
桃花山的美景吸引了很多人,其中有不少是中学生.
2.So I hope the govenment of the city can take some measures to prevent the pollution in case it is too late.句子里take some measures to 表示"采取措施做某事";in case 表示"以免以防".
因此我希望市政府能采取一些措施阻止污染的发生,以免将来无法挽回.
解答 April 2nd Saturday Fine
Today is Saturday,my classmates and teachers went for an outing on the Taohua Mountain.(点明主题)
We gathered at the school gate at 8 o'clock,and then walked for two hours to get there.The beauty of the Taohua Mountain attracted a lot of people,some of whom were senior and junior students.【高分句型一】We carefully listened to our teacher introduce the effect that the rural tourism had on the native economy.After that,we took many photos and some other activities in groups.(描述游玩过程)
When looking through the photos at home,I'm still amazed at the amazing scenes of the moutain now.But I also wonder whether the beauty will last forever.Too much pollution from the tourism must do harm to the enviorment of it.So I hope the govenment of the city can take some measures to prevent the pollution in case it is too late.【高分句型二】(叙述自己的感想)
点评 考查提纲类作文.
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