题目内容
【题目】假如你是来自英国的高三学生Tony, 爱好广泛,性格开朗,到中国某高中学习中文。该校流行音乐俱乐部正在招聘新成员,要求会某种乐器、嗓音好且有团队意识。你希望加入该俱乐部。请用英文写一篇申请信,要点如下。
1.个人基本情况
2.加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件
3.自己的联系方式(电话:87654321;邮箱:tony303@hotmail.com
DearSir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Tony
【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,
I’m Tony, a senior 3 student from England. I have many interests, especially music. I am good at playing the guitar. I also love singing pop songs and people tell me my voice sounds beautiful. In addition, I have a strong team spirit. I want to improve my spoken Chinese by joining the club. When there is an activity, I will be more than happy to serve as the host, which, I believe, can strengthen will my skills and improve my abilities. What’s more, I believe that I can make many Chinese friends there.
I would appreciate it if you could allow to join the club. Please e-mail me on tony303@hotmail.com or call me at 87654321.
Yours sincerely
Tony
【解析】
本文为应用说明文。根据所提供的材料信息,写一封申请信,申请加入校流行音乐俱乐部。写作要点:个人基本情况;加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件;自己的联系方式。写作时人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。
本文内容完整,文中运用了大量的高级词汇和高级句式。以单句为主,长短句相结合,复杂句与简单句相结合。复杂句中运用了定语从句,状语从句和宾语从句,同时还有常见句式和祈使句的运用,句式比较灵活。
文章一开头用几个简单句介绍了自己的基本情况。接着用顺序连词In addition,…和What's more,…叙述加入俱乐部的目的及满足加入俱乐部的条件。本段中运用了许多高级词汇如“in addition(除…还),have a strong team spirit (有强烈的团队精神),join the club(参加俱乐部),serve as (充当,作为),strengthen one's skills (增强某人的技能),improve one's abilities(增强某人的能力)”。复杂句When there is an activity, I will be more than happy to serve as the host, which, I believe, can strengthen will my skills and improve my abilities.中含有一个由when引导的状语从句和由which引导的定语从句。宾语从句I believe that I can make many Chinese friends there.最后部分作一个高分句型I would appreciate it if you can allow me to join the club及一个祈使句交待了自己的联系方式:电话、邮箱等。文章流畅,一气呵成。