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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
    I like music very much，pop songs in particular．Every evening when I am doing my homework and at weekends when I at home，I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder．The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music．Now and then I stopped to follow the songs．Sometimes，my mother comes in，asking me to focus my attention to my homework．She does not like the pop music．Like most grown-ups，she enjoys listen to folk songs，because the peace music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young．It is certain which people of different ages understand music differently and enjoy different kind of music．

分析 本文主要讲述作者喜欢就行歌曲．在做作业时或在家时喜欢听一些最喜欢的歌曲，作者的妈妈提醒作者将注意力放在作业上．其实，作者的妈妈也喜欢听民间音乐．

解答 I like music very much，pop songs in particular．Every evening when I am doing my homework and at weekends when I∧at home，I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder．The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colorful world of music．Now and then I stopped to follow the songs．Sometimes，my mother comes in，asking me to focus my attention to my homework．She does not like the pop music．Like most grown-ups，she enjoys listen to folk songs，because the peace music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young．It is certain which people of different ages understand music differently and enjoy different kind of music．
详解：
1．加am 考查句子结构．分析句子结构，句中缺少谓语动词，因主语是I，且是一般现在时态，加am．
2．attracts改为attract 考查主谓一致．主语patterns是复数，谓语动词也应是复数．
3．stopped改为stop 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
4．to改为on 考查词语用法．focus on意为""集中在，是固定搭配．
5．去掉the 考查冠词．pop music是英语中的惯有名词，不用定冠词the修饰，属于固定用法．
6．listen改为listening 考查动名词．enjou后接动词时用动名词形式．
7．peace改为peaceful 考查形容词．music是名词，其前用形容词作定语．
8．their改为her 考查代词．her指代my mother，即she．
9．which改为that 考查连词．it是形式主语，真正的主语是people of different ages understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music，that引导主语从句．
10．kind改为kinds 考查名词复数．kind是可数名词，表示"不同的种类"用复数形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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