题目内容
【题目】假定你是高三学生李华,你的美国朋友Tony给你发来邮件,询问高考延期后你的近况。请根据以下要点给他写封回信,内容包括:
1.感谢关心;
2.你目前的学习情况。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Tony,
Many thanks for your concern! Though Gaokao has been postponed due to the overwhelming COVID-19 ,it is approaching day by day.
Currently, I' m under unbearable pressure with endless tests to sit. I sometimes suffer test anxiety , which does upset me a lot. But what can't beat me can only serve to make me stronger. I' m positive that with adequate preparations, I' m getting closer and closer to my dream-to be a doctor to relieve pains of patients, which will motivate me to study harder.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给美国朋友Tony回信,告诉他高考延期后自己的近况。
第一步: 审题
体裁: 应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构: 总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 感谢关心;
2.你目前的学习情况。
第二步: 列提纲 (重点词组)
thanks for;due to;under pressure
第三步: 连词成句
Many thanks for your concern!
Though Gaokao has been postponed due to the overwhelming COVID-19 ,it is approaching day by day.
Currently, I' m under unbearable pressure with endless tests to sit.
But what can't beat me can only serve to make me stronger.
I' m positive that with adequate preparations, I' m getting closer and closer to my dream-to be a doctor to relieve pains of patients, which will motivate me to study harder.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步: 连句成篇 (衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second,And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing,On the one hand, On the other hand, while, as for
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步: 润色修改