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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
During studying in Spain，beside taking classes，I travelled around．One of the best part of my experience was living with my host mom，Helena．She was generously welcomed all my classmate Li Li and me into her home．I enjoyed have conversations with him and discussing the cultural differences between Spain and China．Living with my host family or taking classes in Spanish really helps me with my spoken language．I felt my level of cultural awareness was great improved during the five months．Spending time studying abroad in an entirely different culture was best decision I had made．

分析 作者在本文讲述了在Spain学习时的经历．

解答 During studying in Spain，beside taking classes，I travelled around．One of the best part of my experience was living with my host mom，Helena．She was generously welcomed all my classmate Li Li and me into her home．I enjoyed have conversations with him and discussing the cultural differences between Spain and China．Living with my host family or taking classes in Spanish really helps me with my spoken language．I felt my level of cultural awareness was great improved during the five months．Spending time studying abroad in an entirely different culture was∧best decision I had made．
详解：
1．beside改为besides；考查形近单词辨析，beside意为"在…旁边"，besides意为"另外，除…之外"，结合句意此处要用besides．
2．part改为parts；考查名词，one of后面要跟名词的复数形式，表示一个范围． 
3．去掉She后的was；考查动词的语态，主语she与动词welcome之间是主谓关系，不能用被动语态，故把was去掉．
4．all改为both；考查近义词辨析，all指三者或以上，both指两者，故此处用both，与后面的and构成"both…and…"结构．
5．have改为having；考查非谓语动词，enjoy doing是固定搭配，意为"喜欢做某事"．  
6．him改为her；考查人称代词，结合上下文分析此处的人称代词指代Helen，故用her．
7．or改为and；考查连词，分析句意可知此处要表达的是并列关系，而非转折，故用and．  
8．helps改为helped；考查动词的时态，本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，要用一般过去时．
9．great改为greatly；考查副词，此处用副词作状语修饰动词improved．
10．best前加the；考查冠词，最高级前面要加定冠词the．

点评 短文改错首先要通读全文，了解短文的中心思想，再分析句式结构，弄清句子间的结构关系，然后运用所掌握的语法，词汇等基本知识找出错误加以改正．

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When Friday came, I cleaned up, dressed up and drove to the high school gym. I chatted with my teachers and approached Mr. Gardner to thank him before leaving. Just then, the band started playing and a young girl stood up to sing. One look at and I was crazy—I had never seen such a beautiful girl!

I asked Mr. Gardner who she was, and he answered, “That’s Marilyn Riley, Cut Riley’s daughter.” I was shocked to say the least. They lived just around the corner from me. I walked across the gym floor to introduce myself, “Hi, I’m Jack Joseph.”

“I know who you are,” was her not-too-friendly response.

“Would you like to dance?” I asked. “No! I’m working,” she shot back.

“Can I call you next week for a movie date?” I asked. “No,” was her response.

For the next month I phoned, trying to set up a date. She always had the same answer: No. then one rainy afternoon in March as I was driving home after basketball practice, I saw Marilyn, walking with no umbrella, no raincoat, no hat. I pulled alongside her and asked if she needed a ride, half expecting her to say no. instead, she stepped over the roadside and sat down on the seat next to me. It was only a few blocks to her house, but after pulling into her driveway we talked for 45minutes. It was magic from then on.

1.Why did Jack decide to attend the party?

A. The party was hold to welcome him back home

B. Marilyn would be introduced to him at the party

C. He could meet some of his former teachers there

D. They gathered there to celebrate Valentine’s Day

2.What was the author’s attitude towards the party?

A. Casual B. Formal

C. Passive D. worried

3.We can infer from the text that __________.

A. Jack once served in the army after high school

B. it took Jack 45 minutes to drive Marilyn home

C. Jack and Marilyn were familiar with each other

D. it was Marilyn’s cold attitude that interested Jack

4.How would the story most probably develop in the end?

A. Marilyn would fall in love with Jack

B. Jack would make great achievements in college

C. Marilyn would become a famous singer

D. Jack would have frequent conflicts with Marilyn
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，字数100；
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A．took care ofB．take care of
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