Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李华， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：

1. 表示欢迎；

2. 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如气候、 饮食等）；

3.介绍本班情况；

4. 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊

注意：1. 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。

2. 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。

3.词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。

参考词汇： 交换生 exchange student

Dear Chris,

I’m Li Hua , monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven._______________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Chris，

I’m Li Hua, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven. Welcome to our class in China. I'm glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group. Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other. So if you join us, I’m sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too.

The climate here is changeable. Now, it is very cool in autumn and cold in winter, so don't forget to bring different kinds of clothes with you. In your spare time, you can visit some famous places of interest in our city, as well as tasting all kinds of delicious traditional Chinese local foods. We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives. And I can be your tour guide if you like.

As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country. So if it is convenient to you, please bring a map of America and some photos of your families，friends, and some famous buildings with you, and give us some speeches to introduce your school life and different culture of America. And we’ll exchange our different lives and cultures together then.

looking forward to your coming!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李华， 得知美国学生Chris 作为交换生， 下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示， 给他写封邮件：1. 表示欢迎； 2. 介绍与本地生活相关的信息（如气候、 饮食等）；3.介绍本班情况； 4. 希望Chris做哪些事情， 以增进中美学生之间的了解和友谊

写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息。2. 可适当加入细节， 使内容充实，行文连贯。3.词数不少于100； 开头已给出， 不计入总词数。

【亮点说明】众所周知，一篇好的作文首先需要良好的篇章结构；其次需要良好的词汇和高级句式，选词要地道。长短句配合使用。本文中Welcome to our class in China. I'm glad you can join our class, which is a wonderful group.运用非限制性定语从句；Every student not only enjoys studying, but is ready to help each other.运用高级词组not only---but also---；So if you join us, I’m sure you can get along well with them and quickly make friends with them, too. 条件句和宾语从句出现在句中；We Chinese use chopsticks to have Chinese food instead of forks and knives.主语部分使用了同位语，有强调的意义；As an American, there is no doubt that you are familiar with your country.含同位语从句的固定句型。