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3．假设你是李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校．他熟悉中国文化，特别是戏曲文化．8月5日下午2：00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧《梁山伯与祝英台》．请你根据以下提示，用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出．
*提出邀请并简述原因；
*提出观剧后活动建议（如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等）
*请求对方回复
注意：
1．请使用规范英语，词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
越剧：Shaoxing Opera《梁山伯与祝英台》Butterfly Lovers
天津大剧院Tianjin Grand Theater
Dear Chris，
I have good news to tell you．A Shaoxing Opera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in TianjinGrand Theater，which was just completed，at 2：00 p．m．on August 5th．Itis because I know you like the culture of China，especially drama that Iwould like to invite you to admire it．
As we all know，Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama，telling about two young person'smoving love story．After watching it，shall we visit some places nearby，suchas the art museum，in which lots of rich art will appeal to you enormously？
　 I would be very glad if youcome．Looking forward to your early reply．
Yours，
Li Jin．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料，写一封信给Chris写一封电子邮件，邀请他一起观看演出．要点包括：提出邀请并简述原因；提出观剧后活动建议；请求对方回复．写作时以一般现在时为主．人称以第一人称为主．重要短语：be on show （在展览），would like to （想要做），invite sb to do（邀请某人做某事），appeal to （吸引），look forward to doing （期望做某事）．

解答 Dear Chris，
      I have good news to tell you．A ShaoxingOpera named Butterfly Lovers will be on show in Tianjin Grand Theater，whichwas just completed，at 2：00 p．m．on August 5th．【高分句型】It is because I know you like the cultureof China，especially drama that I would like to invite you to admire it．【高分句型】（提出邀请并简述原因）
As we all know，Butterfly Lovers is a traditional drama，telling about two young person'smoving love story．【高分句型】After watching it，shall we visit someplaces nearby，such as the art museum，in which lots of rich art will appeal toyou enormously？【高分句型】（提出关剧后活动建议）
　    I would be very glad if youcome．Looking forward to your early reply．（请求对方回复）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．