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4．假如你将在英语课前五分钟的演讲中向同学们介绍你的偶像宋仲基，请根据以下信息写一篇演讲稿．
1．宋仲基（Song Joong Ki），生于1985年，因他在《太阳的后裔》（Descendants of the Sun）中扮演的男主角而受到中国观众的喜爱；
2．一名有聪明才智的演员，学习成绩优异，曾以全韩国前十的成绩被成均馆大学（SKKU）录取；
3．他的勤奋和努力促成了他在演艺事业上的成功；
4．你崇拜他的原因：坚持梦想，为了实现梦想而努力奋斗的精神（可自行补充）
注意：词数120左右．

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假如你将在英语课前五分钟的演讲中向同学们介绍你的偶像宋仲基，请根据以下信息写一篇演讲稿，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：宋仲基（Song Joong Ki），生于1985年，因他在《太阳的后裔》（Descendants of the Sun）中扮演的男主角而受到中国观众的喜爱；一名有聪明才智的演员，学习成绩优异，曾以全韩国前十的成绩被成均馆大学（SKKU）录取；他的勤奋和努力促成了他在演艺事业上的成功；你崇拜他的原因：坚持梦想，为了实现梦想而努力奋斗的精神（可自行补充）2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：feel honored to非常荣幸地去做；at present目前，现在；do well in 在…方面做得好；be admitted to被录取；As far as I'm concerned以我的观点来看；hold on to坚持；
 I feel honored to stand here to deliver a speech for you，in which I want to introduce to you my idol--Song Joong Ki--an intelligent and diligent Korean actor．（高分句型一）
When in school，he always did well in his study so that he was admitted to the SKKU，with his academic grade ranking top ten．（高分句型二）
 In the entertainment business，he can still hold on to his dream and try his best to attain his ambition，which is why I adore him a great deal．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear classmates，
       I feel honored to stand here to deliver a speech for you，in which I want to introduce to you my idol--Song Joong Ki--an intelligent and diligent Korean actor．（高分句型一）
       Born in an ordinary family in 1985，Song is fairly popular with Chinese audience at present for his wonderful performance in Descendants of the Sun．When in school，he always did well in his study so that he was admitted to the SKKU，with his academic grade ranking top ten．（高分句型二）As far as I'm concerned，it is his hard work that contributes to his success in his study and his career．In the entertainment business，he can still hold on to his dream and try his best to attain his ambition，which is why I adore him a great deal．（高分句型三）
       My fellow classmates，let's set our goals and keep it up，and I believe we will also live up to our dream some day!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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