题目内容
【题目】假如你是银川一中的李华,你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游,你向他推荐了西安市,请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
内容包括:1.自我介绍;
2.推荐理由:历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样;
3.你的祝愿。
注意:1. 字数不少于100;
2. 适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Martin,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Martin,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xian.
I’m Li hua, a student from Yinchuan No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history. When it comes to traveling in China, Xian is a popular tourist destination. First of all, Xian is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself. Second, people in Xian are friendly, kind, and willing to help others, which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant. Third, you can have a chance to experience different cultures and enjoy various delicious snacks in Xian. In addition, I’d like to serve as your guide if you come.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假如你是银川一中的李华,你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生Martin想来中国旅游,你向他推荐了西安市,请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.自我介绍;2.推荐理由:历史悠久、景色优美、文化丰富、市民友好、小吃多样;3.你的祝愿。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1. 字数不少于100;2. 适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
【亮点说明】I strongly recommend that you pay a visit to Xian. 在宾语从句中使用虚拟语气;I’m Li hua, a student from Yinchuan No.1 Middle School, good at Chinese geography and history.句中运用同位语和形容词短语作定语;When it comes to traveling in China, Xian is a popular tourist destination.固定句式:当谈到---的时候;First of all, Xian is not only a city with a long history but also has many places of interest, where you can enjoy yourself. Second, people in Xian are friendly, kind, and willing to help others, which can make your visit comfortable and pleasant.非限制性定语从句巧妙使用;I do hope that you will have a good time in China.强调谓语的运用确实起到点睛之作用。
