Question

【题目】假设你是李华，上周你校为高三学生隆重地举行了 “成人礼”。你以前的外教Kate得知这消息后很感兴趣。请你给她写封信，描述这一盛事。 要点包括：

1. 活动时间：上周五上午9:00-11:30

2. 活动地点：学校大礼堂

3. 活动内容：齐唱国歌、父母期望……

4. 活动意义：感恩、奉献……

注意：1. 词数100左右。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 开头和结束语已为你写好。

参考词汇：成人礼 coming-of- age ceremony

Dear Kate,

I'm so glad to learn that you show great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held by our school recently.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Kate,

I'm so glad to learn that you show great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held by our school recently. Now let me tell you about it in great detail.

It was carried out in the great hall of our school between 9: 00 and 11: 30 a. m. last Friday. At the beginning of the activity, all the students present sang the national song together. Then followed the blessings and wishes from the elders. Meanwhile, the parents also expressed their high expectations of their children. Afterwards, the student representative delivered a speech on the stage. Finally, the school headmaster concluded the whole event.

The coming-of-age ceremony is significant and meaningful. Through this activity, the students, being adults, have a stronger sense of responsibility and gratitude. They have realized they should learn to serve the people and make contributions to society in the near future.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一封介绍信。

第一步：审题：这篇文章是提纲类作文。要求你以李华的身份给以前的外教Kate她写封信，描述学校的成人礼这一盛事。内容要点1. 活动时间：上周五上午9:00-11:30；2. 活动地点：学校大礼堂3. 活动内容：齐唱国歌、父母期望……；4. 活动意义：感恩、奉献……

第二步： 关联词（组）：Meanwhile,…. Afterwards, …. Finally,….

第三步：关键词（组）：At the beginning of…在…的开始； coming-of- age ceremony成人礼；carry out 实施；the national song唱国歌；make contributions to…对…做出贡献 等

第四步：连词成句：

1.I'm so glad to learn that you show great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held by our school recently.

2.Through this activity, the students, being adults, have a stronger sense of responsibility and gratitude.

3.They have realized they should learn to serve the people and make contributions to society in the near future.

第五步：要注意字数恰当，过渡自然，需要写的内容以要点形式已给出，但写作时不要拘泥于对要点进行生硬的翻译。而是要添加些细节，使文章看起来更充实。要组成通顺连贯的短文，务必要试试自己的看法。