Question

【题目】假定你是李华。校英文报Growing pains栏目专门解答中学生的烦恼问题。现栏目收到一封来信。请根据这封信的内容写一封回信。

Dear Editor,

I am really angry with my parents recently. Next Sunday is my birthday. My parents promised to buy a cell phone for me as my birthday present this year. But now when I ask about the birthday present they say they have changed their ideas, because they worry about my study if I get a new cell phone since the final exam is coming soon. They say a cell phone may take up too much of my time. I believe I am old enough to control myself, but they don’t believe me. What’s more, they broke their promise!

Li Yan

内容要求：

1.理解父母良苦用心；

2.手机有利有弊；

3.给出你的建议。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已写好。

Dear Li Yan,

It’s normal to have these feelings.___________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope things will be better for you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Yan,

It’s normal to have these feelings. As a saying says, to be appreciated as a parent is quite unusual. It is quite sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can. We should understand the good intentions of parents. They must have been for your own good. As a high school student, our studies are important and very heavy. There are many advantages of mobile phone, checking dictionaries, listening to music, checking information and so on. But there is also a lot of harm, such as improper use, indeed affect the study and life. We should try our best to study hard and make great progress.

I hope things will be better for you soon!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查书信类作文。首先要认真审题，假定你是李华，校英文报Growing pains栏目专门解答中学生的烦恼问题。现栏目收到一封来信。请根据这封信的内容写一封回信。其次要确定时态，表示经常或反复发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，文章开头要说明理解父母的良苦用心，接着说明使用手机的利弊，文章最后提出自己的建议。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。例如 ：As a saying says俗话说得好，try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大的努力做某事，学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。另外这篇短文还使用了一些高级句型。例如：It is quite sure that parents are willing to do their best to give us as possible as they can. 这里含有一个主语从句。