Question

【题目】假定你叫李华，你的笔友Peter来信询问你校情况。请根据下表提示，给他回一封电子邮件。

Location	In the center of the city
Year of building	In 1957
Basic information	beautiful campus；modern teaching facilities sixty classes；about 3,000 students experienced teachers；lively and interesting classes；hard-working teachers
Achievement	educate many students of high quality one of the best schools in the city

注意：

1.开头语和结束语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.词数100左右。

Dear Peter,

It’s great to receive your e-mail. _____________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

It’s great to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something about our school. Our school lies in the center of the city. It was founded in 1957 and has a history of 50 years. Now, there are sixty classes and about 3,000 students in our school. It has a beautiful campus and modern teaching facilities. The teachers in our school are very experienced, and they often make their classes lively and interesting. Also, they all work hard and put their hearts into teaching. Many students of high quality have been educated since the founding of the school. It is now one of the best schools in the city.

I’m sure our school will become more and more beautiful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本次作文要求笔友Peter来信询问你校情况，写电子邮件介绍学校情况。要点包括：学校的地理位置、历史、现状、教学设施和师生情况。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：文章运用了It’s great to do sth.和one of句型；lies in, put their hearts into等词汇及Now, Also等连接词。