题目内容
【题目】根据下列提示为21st Century Teens写一篇题为 Development of agriculture in China的小短文。（词数120左右）
1. 中国是一个有十三亿人口的大国。
2. 在过去的二十多年间，中国发生了巨大变化，尤其在农业方面。
3. 中国仅有世界7%的土地，却成功地养活了世界22%的人口。
4. 其耕地(farming land)的灌溉面积是世界上最大的。种植了世界三分之一的大米。渔业也非常重要，淡水鱼随处可见。
5. 废弃的蔬菜(vegetable waste)被用来养猪、养鸡；人和动物的粪便(waste)产生的气体被用来供热和做饭。
6. 如果世界上其他地方也像中国一样重视和发展农业，就不会再有饥饿。
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【答案】Development of Agriculture in China
China is a large country with a population of 1.3 billion. In the past twenty years, great changes have taken place in China, especially in agriculture where modern biotechnology plays a an important part. China only has occupied the world 7% lands, which has supported 22% populations in the world. The irrigation area of farming land is the largest in the world, which actually has planted the world’s 1/3 rice. Besides, fishing is also important. Fresh water fish can be seen everywhere. Vegetable waste is used to feed pigs and chickens. Gas produced from human and animal waste is used for heating and cooking. If the rest of the world also fully emphasized and developed agriculture like China, there would be no starvation.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，要求考生根据提示，以Development of agriculture in China为题写一篇小短文。
第一步：审题
体裁： 提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。
要求：1. 中国是一个有十三亿人口的大国。
2. 在过去的二十多年间，中国发生了巨大变化，尤其在农业方面。
3. 中国仅有世界7%的土地，却成功地养活了世界22%的人口。
4. 其耕地(farming land)的灌溉面积是世界上最大的。种植了世界三分之一的大米。渔业也非常重要，淡水鱼随处可见。
5. 废弃的蔬菜(vegetable waste)被用来养猪、养鸡；人和动物的粪便(waste)产生的气体被用来供热和做饭。
6. 如果世界上其他地方也像中国一样重视和发展农业，就不会再有饥饿。。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
take place，play a great important part；is used to；produced from；the rest of
第三步：连词成句
1. China is a large country with a population of 1.3 billion.
2. In the past twenty years, great changes have taken place in China, especially in agriculture where modern biotechnology plays a great important part.
3. China only has occupied the world 7% lands, which has supported 22% populations in the world. 4. The irrigation area of farming land is the largest in the world, which actually has planted the world’s 1/3 rice.
5. Fishing is also important.
6. Fresh water fish can be seen everywhere.
7. Vegetable waste is used to feed pigs and chickens.
8. Gas produced from human and animal waste is used for heating and cooking.
9. If the rest of the world also fully emphasized and developed agriculture like China, there would be no starvation.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
