题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,看到班上有部分同学在做作业时,不自己独立完成而是抄袭他人的作业,针对这种现象,请你以My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework为题谈谈你自己的看法。
注意:1.短文必须包括下面表格中的所有内容要点,可适当发挥。
2.短文标题与开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
3.词数120左右。
主要原因 | 作业量大,偏难 |
对功课不感兴趣,懒隋 | |
完成任务,取悦老师 | |
危害及解决办法 | 抄袭不对,违反校规 |
要诚实,勤奋学习 | |
有困难可请教同学和老师 | |
个人看法 | …… |
My Opinion on Copying Others' Homework
It is known to us all that some students copy others' homework...
【答案】
It is known to us all that some students copy others’ homework. As students, we have to do plenty of homework both at home and at school, but sometimes we have some homework which is too difficult for us. On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons. They don’t work hard. In order to finish the assignments and please their teachers, some students copy others’ homework.
In my opinion, it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the school rules. Students should be honest and try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. Even though we have trouble doing our homework we can ask our classmates or teachers for help.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息来介绍抄袭作业的看法。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照为什么会出现这种现象和怎么解决问题进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如On the other hand, some students are lazy, and are not interested in their lessons.排比句式。it is wrong to copy others’ homework because it breaks the school rules. .是形式主语从句,还有让步状语从句 Even though we have trouble doing our homework we can ask our classmates or teachers for help. 此外,文章还使用了大量短语plenty of homework、by ourselves、have trouble doing our homework等。副词On the other hand、In my opinion,使语言更加连贯。
【题目】随着经济的发展和人们生活水平的提高,近年各地旅游景点人满为患,尤其是一些历史名胜,如长城、紫禁城和各地大型博物馆等等。看到这种趋势,一些旅游景点开始考虑提高门票,并把此消息在各大网站上发布,这在全国引起了一场热烈的讨论,观点如下:
支持者: | 1. 促进当地经济的发展。 2. 景点需要雇佣更多的工作人员提供服务并尽快清理游客留下的垃圾。 3. 门票提高可以确保建筑物的维修。 |
反对者: | 1. 人们将失去休闲放松的地方。 2. 阻碍人们尤其是青少年了解中国的历史和文化。 3. 对于有历史意义的名胜政府应该提供经济援助,而不是依赖民众多掏腰包。 |
你的观点: | 表明态度,列举至少两点理由 |
参考词汇:maintenance 维修(n.) financial 经济的,金融的
注意:1. 对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 字数150左右。开头已经写好,不计入总字数。
With the development of our country’s economy and the people’s living standards improving,a lot of tourism attractions in different areas have witnessed a great increase of tourists in recent years, in which case some tourism sites are considering adopting higher tickets fees and have given out the news on various websites. People have held a heated discussion about it and opinions on it are divided ._____________________________.