题目内容
【题目】书面表达
学校计划举行英语作文竞赛,主题为“We Need Advice from Older Generations”。请根据以下要求写一篇100-120词的作文:
你遇到了困难或问题,不知该怎么办。你去请教一位长辈,后来问题得到了解决。要求写清楚下面三点:
1. 当时面临的困难或问题是什么?
2. 你获得的指教是什么?
3. 结果如何?
注意:不能在作文中出现所在学校的校名和本人姓名。
【答案】
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devoted all my spare time to practising English. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination. I felt very disappointed.
So I asked my grandpa for advice when I went home. Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. We can’t judge our improvement only by one examination. He encouraged me to stick to working hard for a long time to check my results.
I took my grandpa’s advice and have been doing it as he told me to since then. Now my English is much better than before. From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.
【解析】
试题分析:本文的主题是我们需要来自老一辈的建议,本文贴近自己的生活,比较有话说。对于此类文章,要注意一下几点:1、首先,要根据自己的实际生活经历来描写你因为与问题而去请教一位长辈,后来问题得到了解决的实践;2、其次,描述事件的原因、过程、结果时,可以多用一些连接词来时文章顺畅;3、最后,要注意点出文章的主题,文章的主题要与所写内容有关;4、注意单词、词组、句式的运用来给文章增色。
【亮点说明】在对于诸如此类文章的写作,要善于使用不同的句型。英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达,对于不会表达的意思要学会替换。文章按照时间顺序来写,使用了One year ago,since then,Now 这样的时间副词来连接文章。学生在写作时也要注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思,本文运用了in great trouble处于巨大的困难中,devoted all my spare time to付出了我全部的课余时间,stick to坚持等短语。本文也有很多句型值得学习,如Hearing what I told him, he said examination resulted more or less on a fortuitous phenomenon. 运用了非谓语形式,这样文章才能写出新意。最后的结尾From my experience, I feel that we need advice from older generation.点出了文章的主题。