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17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）．并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分．
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend，a truck came to a stop besides us．The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through．I stood there and couldn't believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful．The man insisted，so I grateful accepted the offer，thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road．This man might need the umbrella himself，and he preferred to give it to everyone else．It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return．

分析 故事发生在一个下雨天，我和朋友中的一个步行回家．一辆卡车在旁边停下．司机给他们一把雨伞．虽然不相信，但在这个陌生的司机坚持下，我们接受了．这个人可能也需要伞，但他却更喜欢吧它送给其他人． 这让我明白一个人做某事是可能不图任何回报的．

解答 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend，a truck came to a stop 
                                                                                   friends            
besides us．The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were
beside                                                                               an                                    
wet through．I stood there and couldn't believein  that a complete stranger is so thoughtful．The 
                                                                                                       was                    
man insisted，so I grateful accepted the offer，thanked him and watched the truck disappear down
                          gratefully
the road．This man might need the umbrella himself，and he preferred to give it to everyone else．It 
                                                                             but                                       someone                
was a lesson to us that it was possible∧give without expect anything in return．
                                                       to                  expecting
1．one of my friends 我朋友中的一个；one of 后面用名称复数
2．beside 译"在旁边"besides 译"此外"；
3．umbrella[∧]元音；元音音素前用an．
4．believe in 译"信任"宾语是人活着一种信仰．believe 译"相信"；
5．was．前后时态一致；这是一个过去的故事
6．gratefully 副词修饰动词accept；形容词修饰名词．
7．but 转折连词．本句译为，这个人可能也需要伞，但他却更喜欢吧它送给其他人；
8．everyone每个人 someone某个人．一把伞不可能送给每个人；
9．It is possible to do sth．做某事是可能的；
10 without doing sth．没有做某事．

点评 1．时态是改错题必须考查的项目，一般第一句话就可以推断出，如从One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend，a truck came to a stop 就可以知道这是一个故事，要用一般过时态
2．并列连词and （承接）but（转折） or  （或者）（否则）  看清句子的含义就可以

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