题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告,称其有称职教练,一周包会。考虑到大学要开设游泳课,而你还不会,所以想在暑假参加训练。请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况,要点如下:
1. 训练的具体时间和地点;
2. 课程大概内容和费用;
3. 其他注意事项。
相关词汇:教练instructor
注意:1. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;
2. 词数100左右;
3. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir or madam,
Upon reading an advertisement about a swimming training course on a local newspaper, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with more information regarding the course.
Since it is mentioned that your instructors are fully qualified and can ensure that learners are able to swim well in one weeks training I take a keen interest in it as the swimming course will be offered in the university and I’m unfortunately incapable of doing it. What I want to enquire are when and where the course will be give and how long it will last each day. Additionally, I need to know how much you will charge me for that and I hope I can have access to how the course will be carried out. Lastly, would you be so kind as to inform me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。文章要求写一封咨询信,因为大学要开设游泳课程,而自己不会,因此需向游泳培训班咨询游泳课程的相关事宜,咨询信内容应包括课程的时间地点、内容费用及其他需要注意的事项。
分析题目可知,文章要求写一封咨询信,咨询信内容应包括课程的时间地点、内容费用及其他需要注意的事项,这是在陈述一般事实以及询问在加入课程后的具体事项,因此在陈述自身情况时可使用一般现在时,在询问相关事项时可使用一般将来时。本篇文章的要求较为简单明确,因此可发挥的空间较多,第3个要点:其他注意事项则需要进行随意发挥,如上课时需要带哪些运动器材、上课时需要准备哪些东西等等,言之有理即可。
文章可采用三段式的结构。第一段为写信目的,信的第一段介绍了作者写信的目的,即向游泳训练班表达自己看到广告后想要更多地了解培训班的信息。第二段为邮件的正文部分,详细介绍了自己的背景,如不会游泳,但想要在上大学之前学会游泳;看到广告上提到有职称的教练,想要了解相关信息,接着向培训班咨询自己想要问的问题,如时间地点、内容费用及其他注意事项等。第三段为邮件的结尾部分,表达作者希望能早点收到回答的愿望。