题目内容
【题目】美籍教师Peter在你校工作三年,现即将回国就业。请你以学生会主席李华的名义给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢。内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 感谢的原因;
3. 表达祝福。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union in our school. On behalf of all the students, I’m writing to extend my sincere thankfulness for your three years’ hard work.
Without your excellent teaching and correct guidance, our spoken English wouldn’t have improvedso much. The past three years have witnessed a sea of unforgettable moments we spent together. Your humorous gestures, fluent spoken English and standard pronunciation left a deep impression on us. When we were shy to talk in English, it was you who encouraged us to be brave.
Anyway, thanks again for what you have done to us. We wish you a pleasant journey home and everything goes well with you/all the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一封感谢信。题干中给出了写作时应包含的三点内容,但是每个点描述的并不是很详细,需要同学们在写作时根据自己的学习经历与生活经历适当合理地发挥。
第1步:审题。确定时态和人称。根据提示:美籍教师Peter在你校工作三年,现即将回国就业。你需要以学生会主席李华的名义给他写一封电子邮件表示感谢。写感谢的原因时时态应以一般过去时与现在完成时为主,写其它两点时时态以一般现在时为主。人称以第一人称为主。
第2步:确定关键词(组),提炼写作要点。如:On behalf of… (代表),extend my sincere thankfulness for…(因为……表达我真诚的感谢),a sea of (大量的),left a deep impression on …(对……留下很深的印象),encourage… to…(鼓励……做……)等。
第3步:对写作要点遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。