Question

7．假设你是某国际学校高二（1）班的学生Jack，你的美国朋友Peter来信说要来北京游玩．请根据下面提供的信息，给Peter写一封回信，内容包括：
1．建议他游览故宫及周边景区；
2．建议的理由；
3．祝愿…．
注意：1．词数不少于80；  2．回信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
I am pleased to hear that you are coming to Beijing soon．
                                                  
Yours，
Jack．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们来信给要来北京游玩的美国朋友Peter写一封回信，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般将来时，内容要点包括：建议他游览故宫及周边景区；建议的理由；祝愿…．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为建议他游览故宫及周边景区．第二部分为建议的理由．第三部分为祝愿．
重点短语与句型：
 advise sb  to do sth 建议某人做某事
Palace Museum 故宫
hang out 闲逛，游荡
高分句型一：I'd like to advise you to visit the Palace Museum，which is located in the centre of Beijing．此句用了非限制性定语从句高分句型二：The Palace Museum，the largest museum in China was established during the Ming Dynasty and then passed on to the Qing Dynasty，housing a large valuable collection of royal family treasures．此句用了现在分词短语作后置定语

解答 Dear Peter，
I am pleased to hear that you are coming to Beijing soon．I'd like to advise you to visit the Palace Museum，which is located in the centre of Beijing．（高分句型一）The Palace Museum，the largest museum in China was established during the Ming Dynasty and then passed on to the Qing Dynasty，housing a large valuable collection of royal family treasures（高分句型二）．After visiting the Palace Museum，you can take a trip around it．There are some other well-known museums，parks and commercial centres nearby，such as Chinese History Museum，Beihai Park and Wang Fujing Street etc．（建议他游览故宫及周边景区）
The public transport around is very convenient，You can choose to take subways，buses or taxis．You can also rent a bicycle and hang out on it around．You are sure to enjoy your ride．（建议的理由）
Wish you a good trip in Beijing．（祝愿）
Yours，
Jack

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．