题目内容
12.最近,学校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论.讨论的主题是:周末要不要上课呢?请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇100字左右的短文,客观的介绍一下讨论的情况,并且简单地表达自己的观点.开头已给出,不记入总词数.30% | 30% | 40% |
要上课 高考6月举行,要抓紧时间复习 | 不要上课 休息好,提高效率 | 其中一天学习,一天休息 学习和休息兼顾 |
分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文,根据提示信息学校组织高三学生开展了一场讨论.讨论的主题是:周末要不要上课呢?请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇100字左右的短文,客观的介绍一下讨论的情况,并且简单地表达自己的观点,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架,要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:have classes上课;make full use of充分利用;be against反对;agree with同意;In their opinion以他们的观点来看;have a rest休息一下
30% of them think they should have classes on weekends because the College Entrance Examination this year will be held in June,and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learnt.(高分句型一)
They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays.(高分句型二)
They suggest one day of the weekend should be used to study and during the other day they have a rest.(高分句型三)
解答 Recently,the students of Senior 3 in our school have had a discussion about whether we should have classes on weekends.
30% of them think they should have classes on weekends because the College Entrance Examination this year will be held in June,and students should make full use of free time to review what they have learnt.(高分句型一)
Another30% are against the idea of having classes on weekends.They believe students should have a good rest on weekends so that they can study more effectively during the weekdays.(高分句型二)
The other 40% of the students don't agree with either of the ideas above.In their opinion,study and rest are both important for students.They suggest one day of the weekend should be used to study and during the other day they have a rest.(高分句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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