Question

19．假如你是李华，请结合以下要点给某英语网站投稿，向外国朋友介绍自己的家乡．
1．家乡基本情况；
2．家乡特色．
注意：1．词数100左右
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇（be located in…；  cover an area of； have a population of； impress； be famous …；  worth a visit）
My hometown．
is a mountain village witha history of over 200 years．It has a population of more than 800．It covers an area of 10 square kilometers．
People here live in harmony withnature．There is a river flowing across thevillage．When you arrive here，you can enjoy yourself hearing birds singing in trees andwatching fish swimmingin clear water．What impresses you most is probably that theair is fresh to breathe，there is a wide variety of food to taste andthe local customs are unique．This is a dream place for you to get close to nature．
All guests are welcome and it is worth a visit．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇向外国朋友介绍自己的家乡的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一介绍家乡基本情况；二介绍家乡特色；三欢迎来参观．
高分句型：
1．When you arrive here，you can enjoy yourself hearing birds singing in trees and watching fish swimming in clear water．句子里 hearing birds singing in trees and watching fish swimming in clear water是 enjoy yourself 的伴随状语．
当你到这里的时候，你会听到鸟儿在树上歌唱，看到鱼儿在清澈的水里游泳．
2．What impresses you most is probably that the air is fresh to breathe，there is a wide variety of food to taste and the local customs are unique．句子里What impresses you most 是主语从句，表示"给你印象最深刻的"；that引导三个并列的表语从句．
给你印象最深刻的事是呼吸新鲜的空气；品尝各种各样的美食以及欣赏当地独特的风俗．

解答 My hometown is a mountain village with a history of over 200 years．It has a population of more than 800．It covers an area of 10 square kilometers． People here live in harmony with nature．There is a river flowing across the village．（介绍家乡基本情况）When you arrive here，you can enjoy yourself hearing birds singing in trees and watching fish swimming in clear water．【高分句型一】What impresses you most is probably that the air is fresh to breathe，there is a wide variety of food to taste and the local customs are unique．【高分句型二】This is a dream place for you to get close to nature．（介绍家乡特色）
    All guests are welcome and it is worth a visit．（欢迎来参观）

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