题目内容
11.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I am a student from No 1Middle School.Informing that you are looking for a student to serve as a spokesman for pandas,I am very exciting.I hope that I can get the opportunity to do something else for pandas.I have been the panda lover since my childhood.Pandas are too lovely that they bring us comfort and pleasure.They were referred to as a symbol of our country.Unfortunate,such a lovely species is now faced with the danger of becoming extinct.What I am eager to do are to raise people′s aware of protecting pandas.I would appreciate if I could be chosen as a spokesman.
分析 作者是一位熊猫爱好者,希望能成为熊猫代言,为保护大熊猫尽自己的一份力量.
解答 I am a student from No 1Middle School.Informing that you are looking for a student to serve as a spokesman for pandas,I am very exciting.I hope that I can get the opportunity to do something else for pandas.I have been the panda lover since my childhood.Pandas are too lovely that they bring us comfort and pleasure.They were referred to as a symbol of our country.Unfortunate,such a lovely species is now faced with the danger of becoming extinct.What I am eager to do are to raise people′s aware of protecting pandas.I would appreciate∧if I could be chosen as a spokesman.
详解:
1.informing 改成informed;考查分词作状语,主语I与动词informe是动宾关系,故用过去分词形式作状语.
2.exciting改为excited;考查分词作形容词,现在分词作形容词修饰物,过去分词作形容词修饰人,此处主语为I,故用过去分词形式.
3.去掉else;考查句意,分析句意为"我希望能有机会为熊猫做点事情",不强调"多余的,其它的",else多余,故去掉.
4.the改成a;考查冠词,此处用不定冠词a泛指"一个".
5.too改成so;考查固定搭配,此处用so与后面的that构成so…that结构,意为"如此…以至于".
6.were改成are;考查动词的时态,本文基本时态为一般现在时,此处也要用一般现在时.
7.Unfortunate改成Unfortunately;考查副词,此处用副词作状语修饰整个句子. 8.are to raise改成is to raise
9.aware改成awareness;考查名词,名词所有格 people′s 后面要跟名词形式作raise的宾语.
10.appreciate后加it;考查代词,appreciate作"欣赏,感激"讲是及物动词,后面要跟宾语,故加it作宾语,I would appreciate it意为"我将很感激…".
点评 整体把握短文大意,弄清短文的基本时态,分析句子之间的结构关系,结合上下文语境运用词汇,语法等基础知识找出文中的错误并加以修改.
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