Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你叫李华，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 表示理解和关心；

2. 提出具体建议。

要求：

1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 格式与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible.Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m sorry to here that you’re suffering from WeChat addiction. I really understand how you feel and I’d like to offer you some useful advice that I think will benefit you.

First of all, I suggest that you should start some other hobbies,such as reading, listening to music,or playing chess,etc,which will take your mind off WeChat. Secondly, you’d better make more friends through face-to-face communication.They’ll assist you when you can’t resist the temptation of WeChat. Thirdly, it’s better for you to do some sports instead of using WeChat a lot because sports can not only keep you healthy but also enrich your life and help you forget WeChat.

I hope these ideas can help you get rid of your addiction as soon as possible. Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你叫李华，你的朋友沉迷于微信（WeChat）而不能自拔，写信向你寻求帮助，请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括： 1. 表示理解和关心；2. 提出具体建议。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。要求：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 格式与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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