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情景作文

假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,上周六在颐和园你做了一件好事。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,途述事情发生的全过程。

注意:

1.周记的开头已为你写好。

2.词数不少于60。

Last Saturday was sunny.I went to the Summer Palace to spend my weekend as usual.

答案:
解析:

  (一)评分原则:

  1.本题总分为20分,按5个档次给分。

  2.评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言质量初步确定其档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。

  3.评分时应考虑:内容要点完整性、上下文的连贯、词汇和句式的多样性及语言的准确性。

  4.拼写、标点符号或书写影响内容表达时,应视其影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

  5.次数少于60,从总分中减去1分。

  (二)内容要点:

  1.我在看书,听见喊声

  2.小孩落水,人们围观

  3.脱下外套,跳入水中

  4.奋力施救,小孩脱险

  (三)各档次的给分范围和要求:


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