题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,你的笔友Jane 最近总是感觉身体不适,因此写信向你询问如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点提示给她回信。
要点提示:1.合理饮食;2. 锻炼身体;3. 保证充足睡眠,不要熬夜。
注意:1. 词数不少于120个(信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not very well these days.
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Best wishes.
Yours sincerely.
Lihua
【答案】
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you are not very well these days. In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy. Here is my advice.
Firstly, you should keep a balanced diet. You should avoid eating food high in fat and too much sweet food. You’d better eat more fresh vegetables and fruits. Secondly, taking exercise every day helps building a strong body. Why not take more exercise in your spare time? As we all know, regular exercise is an important part of keeping us healthy. Finally, make sure you have enough sleep and you mustn’t stay up too late at night.
By eating properly and exercising regularly, you can keep your body at a proper weight and stay healthy. I truly hope my advice is helpful and you’ll get well soon.
Best wishes.
【解析】
试题分析:题目是说,假如你是李华,你的笔友Jane 最近总是感觉身体不适,因此写信向你询问如何保持健康。文章要求根据给出的要点给Jane回信,要点提示有:1.合理饮食;2. 锻炼身体;3. 保证充足睡眠,不要熬夜。但是要注意:词数不少于120个(信的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】文中运用了许多固定短语,如keep a balanced diet,had better do ,in one’s spare time,As we all know,keeping healthy, get well等,这些都显示了作者平时良好的积累;使用连接词,如firstly, secondly, finally使得文章结构很清晰;动名词做主语的使用,如taking exercise every day helps…、反问句的使用,如Why not take more exercise …、by做状语的使用,如By eating properly and exercising regularly等,都为文章增色不少