题目内容
9.假如你是李华,你的朋友Mary为了准备期末考试,学习过于劳累,结果病倒了.请你给她写封信,就健康和学习方面提一些建议.词数:100左右.
Dear Mary,
I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill for days.I hope you'll get well soon.You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do exercise,which harms your health(高分句型一).I think it would be much better for your studies if you could pay more attention to your health in the future.
Exercise,which is as useful and important as your study,can not only build up your body but also refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you ensure that your study will not be interrupted from time to time by sickness(高分句型二).
It would be a good idea to take one hour's exercise every day.I'll be very happy to see you come back to school soon.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等.
高分句型一:
You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do exercise,which harms your health
你学习很努力,没有时间做运动,这对你的健康有害.
高分句型二:
Only when you have a strong body can you ensure that your study will not be interrupted from time to time by sicknes.
只有当你有强壮的身体时,你才能确保你的学习不会因疾病而不时中断.
解答 Dear Mary,
I'm sorry to hear that you have been ill for days.I hope you'll get well soon.You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do exercise,which harms your health(高分句型一).I think it would be much better for your studies if you could pay more attention to your health in the future.
Exercise,which is as useful and important as your study,can not only build up your body but also refresh your mind.Only when you have a strong body can you ensure that your study will not be interrupted from time to time by sickness(高分句型二).
It would be a good idea to take one hour's exercise every day.I'll be very happy to see you come back to school soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题,并此为基础进行思维和联想,自由发挥.不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力,而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求.
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Then how about this in(32)B?Surely it needs the wisdom of(33)Ato make a good leader.Perhaps it does,but look when these people(34)Ctheir careers.Winston Churchill was elected to the House of Commons at the age of 26.Abraham Lincoln(35)Dthe life of a country lawyer and was elected to the government at what age?Twenty-six!
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Perhaps there is still hope for me.
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22.A.mind | B.care | C.attention | D.surprise |
23.A.disagree | B.talk | C.meet | D.advise |
24.A.chance | B.discovery | C.research | D.fortune |
25.A.happened | B.wanted | C.succeeded | D.managed |
26.A.last | B.scientific | C.oldest | D.modern |
27.A.found | B.proved | C.doubted | D.showed |
28.A.disappear | B.move | C.drop | D.fall |
29.A.invented | B.improved | C.published | D.made |
30.A.plenty | B.enoug h | C.much | D.all |
31.A.fields | B.science | C.courses | D.ages |
32.A.election | B.politics | C.leaders | D.society |
33.A.age | B.brain | C.living | D.leadership |
34.A.finished | B.won | C.started | D.defeated |
35.A.led | B.devoted | C.began | D.gave up |
36.A.guess | B.know | C.believe | D.agree |
37.A.as | B.to be | C.like | D.about |
38.A.first | B.writer | C.poet | D.former |
39.A.painting | B.idioms | C.fiction | D.works |
40.A.when | B.while | C.who | D.after |