题目内容
【题目】假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校将与英语友好校举办一场在线会议,探讨如何利用网络学习英语,请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
(1) 介绍你是如何利用网络学英语的(至少2点);
(2) 简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法;
(3) 请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意:80-100词;已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。
词汇:网上学习:online study
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
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Thank you.
【答案】As we all know, the Internet is a useful tool which can help us a lot in our study. As for me, I often use the Internet to collect some materials about English, such as some famous English novels. At the same time, I also made a lot of foreign friends through the Internet. We often communicate on the Internet in English, so I have my spoken English improved.
But online learning is also a double-edged sword. On one hand, it does bring us a lot of convenience. But if we indulge in it for a long time, it will also easily distract us from our study. So we should learn how to arrange our time reasonably.
Finally, I would like to invite students who are from our friendly schools to share their experience of learning Englisg through the Internet.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以学生李津的身份写写一篇发言稿,探讨如何利用网络学习英语。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文。
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时。
结构:总分法。
要求:
(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学英语的(至少2点);
(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法;
(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
第二步:列提纲(重点短语)
a useful tool ;made a lot of foreign friends;a double-edged sword;arrange our time reasonably
第三步:连词成句
1. As we all know, the Internet is a useful tool which can help us a lot in our study.
2. I also made a lot of foreign friends through the Internet.
3. But online learning is also a double-edged sword.
4. So we should learn how to arrange our time reasonably.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序:提出如何利用网络学习;网络学习英语的看法;友好学校学生分享经验。
2. 表示并列补充关系:As we all know;At the same time;On one hand;But;So;Finally
第五步:润色修改