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20．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
（2）只允许修改10处，多着（从第11处起）不计分．
The summer holiday is coming，what makes me excited．I have been looked forward to relaxing myself．I'd like to go swimming，climbing mountains and see several movies．I can play the basketball with my classmates．I am sure I'll have so a wonderful time during the summer holiday!However，my parents think different．They don't want me go out．They are afraid I will lost my way．I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage．If I was my parents，I would give more freedom to my children．

分析 本文主要讲述作者盼望暑假到来．这样便可以去游泳，爬山和看几场电影．但作者的父母怕作者出去迷路，便将作者关在家里，使作者很失望．

解答 The summer holiday is coming，what makes me excited．I have been looked forward to relaxing myself．I'd like to go swimming，climbing mountains and see several movies．I can play the basketball with my classmates．I am sure I'll have so a wonderful time during the summer holiday!However，my parents think different．They don't want me∧go out．They are afraid I will lost my way．I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage．If I was my parents，I would give more freedom to my children．
详解：
1．what改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
2．looked改为looking 考查动词时态．根据句意：我一起期待着放松自己．用现在完成进行时．
3．climbing改为climb 考查动词不定式．go swimming，climb mountains和see several movies都并列的动词不定式短语．
4．去掉the 考查冠词．球类名词前不加冠词．
5．so改为such 考查词语用法．such+a（an）+adj．+单数可数名词；so+形容词+a（n）+单数名词．
6．different改为differently 考查副词．修饰动词think用副词．
7．加to 考查动词不定式．want sb．to do sth．想让某人做某事．to do 做want的宾语补足语．
8．lost改为lose 考查动词时态．"will+动词原形"构成一般将来时．
9．keeping改为kept 考查过去分词．bird和keep之间是被动关系，过去分词kept in a cage作定语，修饰a bird．
10．was改为were 考查虚拟语气．在if引导的非真实条件句中，表示与将来事实相反时，从句用一般过去时（be动词用were），主句用would+动词原形．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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Traditionally，doctors in the UK have advised back pain sufferers to stay active，do stretching exercises and take painkillers when necessary and in more serious cases some people are given X-ra y treatment or injections with therapeutic substances．
NICE，however，say there is evidence that acupuncture may be more effective than expensive X-rays or injections，so patients who have been suffering for over six weeks should be given a choice．As an alternative to acupuncture，patients will be able to choose for either a course of spinal manipulation（脊柱推拿术），or a series of special exerci se sessions．In the UK，acupuncture is classed as a complementary therapy，which is the term given to a medical procedure which hasn't received the strict trials by which scientists prove some treatments work．
While many experts have welcomed the move to make acupuncture available on the NHS，some are still doubtful about its effectiveness．Research from the US earlier this month found that using toothpicks could be as good as using real needles．So while some are yet to be convinced，back pain sufferers will be hoping that acupuncture helps get them feeling healthy and mobile again．Employers，on the other hand，will be hoping it gets them back to work．
32．What can we learn from the first paragraph？B
A．The British have come to know acupuncture recently．
B．About thirty percent of the British suffer from back pain．
C．NICE has been arguing against Chinese needle therapy．
D．The British ask for sick leave mostly because of cold or flu．
33．The traditional ways to treat back pain in the UK includeC．
A．staying in bed for rest     
B．Chinese needle therapy
C．receiving X-ray treatment  
D．avoiding physical exercises
34．In treating back pain，acupunctureA．
A．may cost less than X-rays               
B．works surely better than injections
C．has gone through strict scientific tests    
D．will replace the traditional ways in the UK
35．What do experts think of acupuncture？D
A．They think highly of it．               
B．Most of them are against it．
C．Few recognize its usefulness．      
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11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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60．The main purpose of holding this alumni networking event isD．
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C．to help the alumni to launch new career initiatives
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15．_____ how to get along with others is very important in success．
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内容提示：（1）描述吃零食的现象；
（2）阐述吃零食的影响；
（3）提出合理化的建议．
注意：（1）词数100左右，开头己为你写好（不计入总词数）．
（2）参考词汇：snacks零食：phenomenon现象．
Dear fellow students．
There is a serious phenomenon in our school．We find many students will crowd in the school store to buy snacks after each class．Some students even eat snacks in class．
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Dear fellow students，we shouldn't act like kids any more．We high school students should develop god habits．Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are essential for us．Let's form good eating habits and say no to snacks!
Students'Union．
12．The girl，whose health        after taking the medicine，was only six years old．（　　）
A．ruinedB．was ruinedC．has ruinedD．had ruined
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People only thought spinach had a lot of iron because the people who studied the food made a mistake．In the 1890s，a group of people studied what was inside vegetables．This group said that spinach had ten times more iron than it did．The group wrote the number wrong，and everyone accepted it．
Today，we know that the little iron there is in spinach cannot make a difference in how strong a person is．However，spinach does have something else which the body needs-folic acid．It is interesting to point out that folic acid can help make a person strong．Maybe it was really the folic acid that made Popeye strong all along．

25．Why did many people eat spinach after they saw Popeye the Sailor？A
A．They thought spinach made them strong．
B．They thought Popeye was funny．
C．Spinach had a lot of iron．
D．People liked folic acid．
26．A research group told people that spinachD．
A．made Popeye strong
B．was a green vegetable
C．had less iron than other green vegetables
D．had more iron than other green vegetables
27．The reading passage says that perhaps Popeye got his strength fromB．
A．iron
B．folic acid
C．spinach
D．exercise
28．Folic acid isA．
A．something in food
B．a vegetable
C．dangerous
D．a certain kind of spinach．

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