Question

【题目】假如你是李华。你的朋友Tommy是一个手机低头族，无论站着、坐着、走着，他都在低头玩手机。请就此给Tommy写一封信。

内容包括：1．做手机低头族的危害（过度使用手机会导致眼睛疾病或带来其他健康问题，给自身安全带来隐患）；

2．希望他改掉这个坏习惯。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头语和结尾语已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：过度使用overuse

Dear Tommy,

There seems to be a trend that people now tend to play with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.

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Yours,

Li Hua

【思路导航】本篇作文是一封书信。此类作文是近几年来高考常考的内容。对于此类作文的写作，考生应注意以下几点：一、写作时要将题目中所要求的内容全都包括进去，不要有任何遗漏。二、在写作的过程中，要注意连接词和某些高级词汇的运用。三、要注意适当增加细节。四、字迹要工整，注意行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tommy,

There seems to be a trend that people now tend to play with their cell phones no matter where they are. And I know you are not an exception.

There is no doubt that cell phones play an important part in our daily life. However, being addicted to cell phones does a lot of harm to the owners. First, staring at a cell phone screen for hours on end can lead to dry eyes or other eye diseases. Second, if you always overuse your cell phone, your hands as well as your neck will ache, which will have a bad effect on you. Besides, on your way home or to school, with your attention fully focused on the cell phone, perhaps you will fail to notice the traffic around you, which will be a great danger to you.

Therefore, I sincerely expect you to give up your bad habit and use your cell phone wisely.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】略