题目内容
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以 下作文.作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该那个加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Mr.Dyson,
I would like to apply to be an assistant in your company.I had got a Master's degree in mechanical engineering from Peking University last year.Beside,I have got experience in designing new projects and developing good professional competence in my subjects in the past few years.
I worked in my holidays for a company where designed engines for jeeps.Help them design parts of the new engine made me know the important of creativity.Thus,it occurred to me I would like to work in a inventor's company.
Although I know the competition is intensely in your company,I would appreciate that if you would consider employing me.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Xue.
分析 本文是作者的一封应聘信.在信中作者介绍了自己的学习情况及一些相关的工作经历,并表示如果对方考虑雇用自己将不胜感激.
解答 Dear Mr.Dyson,
I would like to apply to be an assistant in your company.I had got a Master's degree in mechanical engineering from Peking University last year.Beside,I have got experience in designing new projects and developing good professional competence in my subjects in the past few years.
I worked in my holidays for a company where designed engines for jeeps.Help them design parts of the new engine made me know the important of creativity.Thus,it occurred to me∧I would like to work in a inventor's company.
Although I know the competition is intensely in your company,I would appreciate that if you would consider employing me.
Yours sincerely,
Liu Xue详解:
1.去掉had 考查动词时态.根据句中时间状语last year,要用一般过去时态.去掉had成为一般过去时态.
2.Beside改为Besides 考查副词.beside意为"在…旁边;在…附近",是介词,besides意为"而且,也",是副词.此处应是:而且,也.
3.developing改为developed 考查动词时态.got和developed是并列谓语,都是现在完成时态,developed前省略了have.
4.where改为which/that 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词company在从句中作主语,用关系代词which/that.
5.Help改为Helping 考查动名词.分析句子结构,句中缺少主语,用动名词短语Helping them design parts of the new engine作主语.
6.important改为importance 考查名词.定冠词the后接名词形式.
7.加that 考查连词.it是形式主语,真正的主语是从句I would like to work in an inventor's company,但连词that不可省略.
8.a改为an 考查冠词. company是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指,因inventor读音以发元音开头,用不定冠词an.
9.intensely改为intense 考查形容词.be动词后接形容词作表语.
10.that改为it 考查固定句型.would appreciate it if…意为"如果…将不胜感激",是一个固定句型.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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15.A.so | B.and | C.or | D.but |
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17.A.words | B.faces | C.hearts | D.ears |
18.A.approved | B.accused | C.admitted | D.apologized |
19.A.stuck | B.broke | C.threw | D.kept |
20.A.hopeful | B.wasteful | C.merciful | D.grateful |
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42.A.environment | B.economy | C.opportunity | D.climate |
43.A.choice | B.danger | C.desire | D.future |
44.A.quiet | B.busy | C.easy | D.long |
45.A.so | B.but | C.for | D.or |
46.A.day | B.week | C.month | D.year |
47.A.town | B.direction | C.situation | D.habit |
48.A.surprise | B.fear | C.delight | D.peace |
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50.A.appointment | B.progress | C.commitment | D.decision |
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56.A.writing | B.translating | C.publishing | D.reviewing |
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58.A.rewarded | B.paid | C.fired | D.hired |
59.A.different | B.unimportant | C.strange | D.tough |
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