题目内容
【题目】假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣,发来邮件和你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.月亮在中国文化中的寓意;
2.你对人类探月活动的看法。
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jim,
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.
I hope you find what I’ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封电子邮件。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件:假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣,发来邮件和你讨论该话题。请你给他回复邮件,内容包括:
1.月亮在中国文化中的寓意;2.你对人类探月活动的看法。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration(跟大家分享一下我对月球探索的热情);rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion of the earth(《大地的忠实伴侣》背后有着丰富的文化内涵);benefits our everyday life(有益于我们的日常生活);等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。