Question

【题目】假如你是李华。最近你所居住的涉外小区里车辆乱停乱放现象很严重。请你根据所给提示，给小区负责人史密斯先生写一封信反应这个问题。要点包括：

1.分析原因

2.你的建议

注意：1．词数100左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；

2．可根据内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr Smith,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

Parking in our community is becoming a more and more serious problem and is bringing lots of inconvenience to our life.

I think one reason is that there is not enough parking places. You know, there has been a rapid increase in the number of private cars here. However, the number of parking places has remained the same. Besides, there are no strict rules for foreign vehicles. So people who don’t live here park their cars anywhere they want.

I hope the problem can be solved as soon as possible. Here are my suggestions. First, more parking areas should be built. In addition, effective parking rules should be introduced.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：假如你是李华。最近你所居住的涉外小区里车辆乱停乱放现象很严重。请你根据所给提示，给小区负责人史密斯先生写一封信反应这个问题。要点包括：1.分析原因 2.你的建议。这是一篇明显的提纲作文，就是把文章的情景和内容要求分成块，以叙述的形式列出以进行写作。考生在审题的时候应该注意审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。题文已经告知要求，那么文体应为应用文体；又根据“你是李华” 写作时即用第一人称“我”，即李华；时态主要用一般过去时即可。考生在写作时应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误。然后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。

【亮点说明】本文语言凝练，论点鲜明，条理层次清晰。文章使用了v-ing做主语Parking in our community （在我们的社区停车）；that引导的表语从句that there is not enough parking places（没有足够的停车地方）和who引导的定语从句who don’t live here（不住在这个地方的人）；倒装句型的使用Here are my suggestions.（这是我的建议）。最后一句使用In addition, effective parking rules should be introduced除此之外，应引进有效的停车制度，作者提出自己的建议并给文章一个完美的结束。