Question

【题目】假定你是高中学李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，对高中学习感到忧虑，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

1.与老师交流，征求老师意见；

2.上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；

3.课后积极完成作业，巩固知识。

4…….

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Tim,

I am glad to hear that you will be a senior student…

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m delighted to hear that you’ll be a senior student. Now, I’d like to share my study tips with you.

First, you’d better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, its a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.

I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.

Best wishes!

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，采用三段式。语言简练，段落清晰，布局合理，运用高级句子。Having learned that you’ll be a senior student, how delighted I am.现在分词的完成式作时间状语，同时使用感叹句；take notes carefully so that you can review later?使用目的状语从句；it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.动词不定式作真正的主语，句中运用非限制性定语从句和宾语从句；另外，First, Second, why not involve yourself in的运用为文章增色添彩。