Question

16．请写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活中的重要性以及如何解决缺水问题．
1、没有水，人与动物怎么办？
2、缺水问题越来越严重．原因是人口增长；工、农业发展；污染．
3、应采取措施，解决缺水问题；充分利用；避免污染；净化雨水或海水．
词数：120左右
生词：净化purify；缺水water shortage；污染pollute；采取措施take measures； 工业industry
注意：
1．包括以上要点．
2．不要逐字逐条翻译，可以适当增加细节．
3．字数120词左右．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，阐述水在人们生活中的重要性以及如何解决缺水问题．写作要点包括：1、没有水，人与动物怎么办？2、缺水问题越来越严重．原因是人口增长；工、农业发展；污染．3、应采取措施，解决缺水问题；充分利用；避免污染；净化雨水或海水．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重点词汇：hot issue（热点问题）；pay attention to （注意）；lead to（导致）；be worth doing（值得做…）；take measures（采取措施）；play an important role（骑着重要作用）；make good use of （充分利用）
高分句型：1．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem．
                 在这个固定句型中，it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句．
                 2．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention．
                  how to solve such a serious problem 是一个主语从句，作句子的主语．
                 3．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it．
                  It's high time that…句型，意为（是时候…），that从句用虚拟语气"should+动词原形"．

解答 Lately，the importance of water and the water shortage problem have become a hot issue．It's generally believed that humans should pay much attention to the water problem（高分句型一）．开门见山，提出问题
Water is very important to living things．Without water，there would be no life on earth．All animals and plants need water．Man also needs water．
Recently，as the population of the world is growing rapidly，using much water is a must．The development of agriculture and industry leads to water pollution．Thus，how to solve such a serious problem is indeed worth paying more attention（高分句型二）．
As a saying goes，small actions make a big difference．It's high time that we should take some effective and immediate measures to solve it（高分句型三）．First，raising the public awareness plays an important role in solving the problem．Besides，we should make good use of water and prevent water from being polluted．Meanwhile，we can purify rainwater and sea water（需要采取的措施）．
It's better late than never．Faced with the water problem，we should work together to protect our water resource and save every drop of water．发出倡议

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．