Question

1．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文．请你根据下列要点写封回信．
要点：1．参加中文学习班2．看中文书刊、电视3．学唱中文歌曲4．其他
注意：1．词数100左右2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Peter，
                                                                     
Best Wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息告诉Peter如何才能学好中文．写作时注意以下几点：1、参加中文学习班；看中文书刊、电视；学唱中文歌曲；其他．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般过去时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take a Chinese course上中文学习班；Besides另外；make more Chinese friends交中国朋友；I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．（高分句型）
Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese characters more easily．（高分句型）

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．（高分句型）
Here are a few suggestions．First，it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and p ractice with your fellow students．Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese characters more easily．（高分句型）You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．
Try and write to me in Chinese next time．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感．（1）认真审题，确定体裁． （2）构思要点．根据题目要求，理解要表达的要点．设计好文章的层次段落，考虑所用时态、人称等，把要点串联起来，构成文章框架．（3）选词造句，避难选易．（4）认真检查，避免错误．仔细阅读全文，查找是否有错，注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误，句式是否正确．逻辑是否一致．