题目内容
7.假定你是高二学生李华.你的英国笔友Mike 来信说他准备戒烟.请你根据以下内容提示给他回信:1.给予肯定和鼓励;
2.推荐可行的戒烟方法;
3.表达你的祝愿.
注意:
1.词数100-120;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
分析 这是一篇提纲作文,让我们给准备戒烟的英国笔友Mike回信,这需要我们发挥英语思维,将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来.写作需要用第一人称,时态主要是一般现在时,内容要点包括:给予肯定和鼓励;推荐可行的戒烟方法(如:列出戒烟的好处;干家务、与朋友聊天来忘掉抽烟;参加戒烟俱乐部等等);表达你的祝愿.我们此篇作文分为三部分,第一部分为给予肯定和鼓励.第二部分为推荐可行的戒烟方法.第三部分为表达美好祝愿.
重点短语与句型:
be delighted to do sth 高兴去做某事
decide to do sth 决定做某事
make up one's mind to do sth下定决心做某事
feel like doing sth 想要做某事
高分句型一:I was delighted to hear from you,knowing that you have decided to stop smoking.此句用了现在分词knowing作伴随状语
高分句型二:Whatever happens,just believe that you will succeed eventually.此句用了Whatever引导让步状语从句
解答 Dear Mike,
I was delighted to hear from you,knowing that you have decided to stop smoking(高分句型一).As you're always a strong-minded guy,I'm sure you can manage it once you make up your mind.(给予肯定和鼓励)
I'm sending you some advice that might help.First of all,prepare yourself.Throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you will get from stopping smoking.Secondly,be determined.Every time you feel like smoking a cigarette,remind yourself that you are a non-smoker.Thirdly,get help if necessary.Joining a stop-smoking group and talking to friends or doctors are good ideas.Whatever happens,just believe that you will succeed eventually.(高分句型二 )(推荐可行的戒烟方法)
I'm looking forward to your good news.(表达美好祝愿)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.
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